School Days
I walked through the gate of my old school,
Seeing myself with my friends, acting cool.
But now I am alone and with no friends,
My school days are over, the fun just ends.
I walked on the path, on which I walk several years ago,
Where I smile, laugh and cry but now am that so.
Slowly I opened the door of my old class room,
Seeing myself fighting with my friends with old broken broom.
But now only memories are here with me and I am alone,
I wish those good days could come back but they are gone.
Suddenly I realize years ago my heaven was here,
I see myself talking and murmuring with my friends everywhere.
I remember all my friends, whom I met on every sunrise,
“I really miss you all”, I said with tears in my eyes.
Submitted by Shivani.
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dear shivani,
i just love to read this poem…it recalls my memories when i was in school.
good job.
really this is the best poem. i like this poem so much……-)
this is the best poem. i like this poem so much
Yeah……my eyes fill wth tears wen i read it.
I recalls d golden part of my life……ma schl days.
Nice one,i remembered my all school mates, greatone
Dear shivani,
this is one of the best poem.missing old wonderful days.
Hello shivani ,
i have just read your poem & i got upset
because i am also remembering my school days .. my friends , my teachers . i am missimg them …
your poem is really heart touching …
“the most wonderful poem i have read till now” . …….. thank you !
dear,
i m a sufferer of loosing my golden heven school days..
but ur poem really melt my pain a bit..
its good..:-D
Hey shivani…..ur poem so lovely…..i rembr my schl dys nd my teachrs my sweet frnds….
i miss my schooldays very much this poem reminds me of golden school days
hi Shivani,iam just read your poem.it is heart touching.after reading it i remember my school friends.
nice1 dudu.. really missing those dayz…
tnks shivani for the poem , even my eyes are filled with tears00
Tears rolled down…its really touchng…thnx 4 dis wonderful job.., Shivani.!!
Such a lovely poem it is..
Its a reality of all students in a school life..
yaar shivani…this is 1 of d best poem..its really touchng ..really missng dos days :’)
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yar kahan gaye vo din :`(
hey shivani it’s an awsome poem i should say it’s not a poem it’s your feelings which are really great
cute poem.good job.
reallly nice… its true. i too miss those golden days
this poem took me too my school”Sri. ramakrishna matric hr.sec school,Coimbatore” with tears….
awsm poem yaar
Really an awsome poem..loved it..done a grt job..
hey guys this is me your alls shivani the writer of this poem today i feel so glad n happy n i am having little tears in my eyes today after reading of all your comments …………………………..THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR YOUR LOVELY COMMENTS
thanx 4 this poem
wonderfull job thanx 4 this poem
Hello,
I am an English teacher. I wonder if I can use your poem for my class.
Best regards.
I love this poem…… It reminds me of my school experience
Hey shivani, this is one of the best friendship poem i ever read,yar phirse school jaane ko mann kr raha hai.