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For The Daughters – From The Fathers

How proud does he feel,
To be a father,
Even more proud does he feel,
To be the dad of a daughter.

He dearly loves her,
More than he loves his wife,
He really madly loves her,
Much more than his own life.

He guides her right from the day she is born,
He’s the one who teaches her to walk in the lawn,
He’s the one who teaches her to read in the dawn,
And he’s also the one who teaches her to pray
When the day’s gone!

Till now, he’s a loving father,
Of a dear daughter,
Till now he’s a proud father,
Of a cute daughter.

But as time passes by,
She no more needs this old guy,
And all she has gotta say—
Is,— “He knows nothin’ of today.”!!!

Slowly she jumps from the lap of teenage,
And enters the gate of adulthood;
She leaves this old father on a certain day,
And breaking the rules, with her lover, she runs away!

He becomes nearly paralyzed,
His heart breaks to cold pieces like ice,
And he thinks, he ‘was’ a loving father,
And he ‘was’ a proud father!

A child relieves its pain by crying to its parents,
And so a wife to her husband,
But a father has none to stand,
And thus, his tears dry within his broken heart!

This is the pain frequently given by proud daughters,
This is the pain frequently received by poor fathers,
And this pain of a loving father
Is the Most Tragic Pain in the world of Love!!

Once, she was a proud loving daughter,
And now, she’s a proud loving guy’s lover!!!

The poem is copyrighted. Dipankar Bhagawati(Stephen Styris),

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To My Friend


Still now when I think of you,
Streams of tears roll down my cheeks,
Still now when I think of our lost friendship,
I’m totally lost in a tragic world of breaks…!

Whether you miss me, I don’t know,
But that every day and every where I do miss you is true,
Whether you believe it or not, but I’m not gonna show,
But throughout my life, I’ll hopefully wait for you!

Belief, faith, understandin’ and misunderstandin’ —
These are the words now I feel like hatin’,
Because of these words’ improper use,
Has most probably compelled my lovely friendship to diffuse!

I ne’er had a single thought that our friendship’ll ever break,
May be for my own carelessness our friendship had to wreck,
I agree it was my fault; now won’t you come back?
Cos’ I madly need your friendship, and that’s a fact!

I smile and laugh in the light,
I jump and play in the day,
People think me as ever happy and ever gay,
But do you know all the night I weep and cry??
Only for you whom I ne’er wanna say goodbye…!!!

I Gift You Your Angel

I Gift You Your Angel!

It was some seven and a half years back,
I met a good girl and we became good friends,
But that good friendship and her dormant love now I lack;
And now, even my faintest shadow she hates!

So man, you’ll no more have to wait out the door,
Cos’ I won’t love her any more,
For now I know what is truly true…
That you love her and she wants you…

Come on man; get back to your old road along the coast,
Re-step into the beautiful world you’ve always loved the most,
Rain will shower on both of you and wash off all your pains,
And I’ll stand by your side and towel off all the toxic rains!

I gift you your love, I return you your Angel,
Just be a good man, and she’ll be ever happy and well…!

Stephen Styris
Bongaigaon College, Bongaigaon,Assam…

Sing Me


Sing me once more that sweet song
And give me what my heart wanted for so long,
Fly me out of this immoral land,
Do stare at my eyes and hold my hand…

Sing me once more that enchanting song
And give me the care I missed out so long,
Do wipe away my dormant fears, all my hidden tears,
That has been left unattended for nineteen years…

Sing me once more that fertile song,
Cuz’ I’m too weak to start with the Devils a real ding-dong,
Empower me – do give me the energy to fight,
So that those helpless beggars can at least sleep peacefully at night…

Sing me now any song; sing me any melody,
Or even you can sing me a long medley,
But I request you to sing me a completely virgin lullaby
When finally opium will also kick me without turning me drowsy and sleepy…

Thus, your songs are my love; your songs are my life,
Along with those I grow; alone without those I die…

Stephen Styris,
Bongaigaon College, Bongaigaon, Assam

I Lied

My life exists as ordinary
As what other beings have
With laughters and merriment
Sadness and worries, too.

For years I withhold the past
Which once made me cried
And wipe out all the pains
It just created in my heart.

Ignoring what’s inside of me
Pretending I’ve moved on
Believing somehow what I felt
Had gone already.

I stopped the memories
We spent together
And rather spend each day
With happiness and laughters.

But you came back again
My heart stopped for a moment
As if I’m breathless
And tears started to flow.

Why only now?
When everything’s going great?
I’ve waited in silent
Hoping you’ll find me, too.

I belong to someone else now
And things are different
But I must admit
I still care and long for you.

Please leave and never return
Cause you only make this sadness
Kill me more and more
So, go where you used to be!

I have to move ahead
For the sake of my loved ones
I don’t want to prolong the pain
You once caused in my heart.

If we’re meant to each other
God will lead us to one another
Not now, but in His time
Free to love unselfishly.

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Broken Heart

I let you have it.
I let you keep it.
Let you hold it and keep it safe.
Handed it back broken, bruised,and tore.
You didn’t keep it safe
Didn’t even love it.
Tore my heart in two.
You left it in the rain, thunder, and lighting.
Causing more destruction the Katrina could ever do.
Don’t bother to fix.
Just keep it tore.
Thinking it will mend itself.
My heart is ruined because of you.
Now fixing my heart
Like gluing broken glass back together.
Try to fit pieces with different colors.
Broken, Tore, Un-Loved, and Dead
Waiting, waiting ,and waiting
for someone else
to hand it back just like you.
Waiting and Un-Loved.
My heart is broken
and might never
love again.

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Time Will Tell

The love we used to have
Is hard to forget
The pain of leaving
Is unbearable and dying.

The separation we had
Is just temporary
None of us knows
When we’ll meet again.

I believe this love
Will kindle again
Not now….
Perhaps, on another time.

I’ll wait…
Let this agonizing sadness
Just flies….
On the wings of time.

No true love
Can’t wait for the right time
So I’ll stay just here
And pray it will come soon.

When our hearts meet again
And freely show to them
Our true and lasting love.

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My Husband

I couldn’t find a word
To express how much I love you
Cause in my heart and mind
I am overwhelmed by your love.

You’re not a perfect lover
Always has bad moods I hate
A snob man like you
An irksome to a woman like me.

You believe you stand out in everything
But for me you’re just big headed
Don’t wait for my opinions
Rather assumed to be very good.

I abhor some of your ideas
It irritates me a lot
Your words are better than mine
As if you are the best of all.

But what makes me stay long
In this up and down love affair
Is your honesty and loyalty
To your promises on our love.

I may not be the woman
With the most beautiful face
But you always assure me
I possess the beauty no one has.

Your kiss and hug everyday
Brings comfort to my loneliness
Never a dull moment
When you speak of love.

I am always pleased
With your endearing words
Coupled with genuine actions
Of how much you really love me.

May our love last forever
Even if it takes longer
How I wish it will never stop
Till our last breath.

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You Forgive Me For

Let’s Make a Deal….

You Forgive me for…

You forgive me for liking you too much,
and i’ll forgive you for not liking me enough…

You forgive me for missing you so,
and i’ll forgive you for being so cold..

You forgive me for the loud racing of my heart,
and i’ll forgive you for not hearing it.

You forgive me for playing your game,
and i’ll forgive you for toying with my emotions.

You forgive me for finding you so attractive,
and i’ll forgive you for not noticing.

You forgive me for raising you up so high,
and i’ll forgive you for bringing me down so low.

You forgive me for wanting to be with you,
and i’ll forgive you for avoiding me.

You forgive me for being so pathetic,
and i’ll forgive you for advantage of it.

You forgive me for not being able to let go,
and i’ll forgive you for never having latched on.

You forgive me for having hopes and dreams,
and i’ll forgive you for crushing them.

FORGIVENESS bring inner peace….

Do we have a deal…???

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