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Old 24th February 2012, 02:14 PM
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ਤੇ ਸੀ। ਇੱਕ ਕਾਲਾ ਇੱਕ
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ਚਰਚ ਦੇ ਗੇਟ ਦੇ ਅੰਦਰ ਹੋਣ
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ਕਿ ਗੋਰਾ ਸੀ ਨੇ ਬਹਾਨੇ ਨਾਲ
ਕਿਹਾ " ਬੇਟਾ, ਤੂੰ ਚਰਚ ਦੇ
ਅੰਦਰ ਨਹੀ ਆ ਸਕਦਾ ,
ਉਸ ਦਿਨ ਆਵੀ ਜਿਸ ਦਿਨ
ਤੂੰ ਸਾਰੇ ਮਾੜੇ ਕੰਮ ਛੱਡ
ਦੇਵੇਗਾ ਅਤੇ ਤੇਰਾ ਦਿਲ
ਪ੍ਰਭੂ ਵਾਸਤੇ ਬਿਲਕੁਲ
ਸਾਫ ਹੋਵੇਗਾ"

ਕਾਲਾ ਓਥੋ ਹੀ ਵਾਪਸ ਮੁੜ
ਗਿਆ। ਉਸ ਨੇ ਸਾਰੇ ਗਲਤ
ਕੰਮ ਛੱਡ ਦਿੱਤੇ ਅਤੇ
ਆਪਣਾ ਪਲ ਪਲ
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ਵਿਚ ਲਾਉਣਾ ਸ਼ੁਰੂ ਕਰ
ਦਿੱਤਾ। ਇੱਕ ਦਿਨ ਉਸ ਨੂੰ
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ਪ੍ਰਭੂ ਨੇ ਕਿਹਾ ਮੈ ਤੇਰੇ ਤੋ
ਬਹੁਤ ਖੁਸ਼ ਹਾ।

ਕਾਲੇ ਨੇ ਪ੍ਰਭੂ ਤੋ ਪੁਛਿਆ "
ਹੇ ਪ੍ਰਭੂ , ਕੀ ਹੁਣ ਮੈ ਚਰਚ
ਦੇ ਅੰਦਰ ਵੜ ਸਕਦਾ ? "

ਤਾ ਪ੍ਰਭੂ ਨੇ ਕਿਹਾ ਕਿ "
ਬੇਟਾ ਤੂੰ ਕੀ ਕਰਨਾ ਓਥੇ
ਜਾ ਕੇ.....ਉਹਨਾ ਨੇ ਤਾ ਕਦੇ
ਮੈਨੂੰ ਨੀ ਅੰਦਰ ਵੜਨ
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Old 24th February 2012, 02:23 PM
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