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rehn salamat maawan, maawan hundiyan thandiyan shaawan
niggi goud ,, aseesi bahwaan,,mildiyan jannat de vich thaavan,,

maa rehndi naal hmesha,, dave asees naa mange paisa
dhee putt di khair mnoundi,, pyaar rooh da jind naal jaisa

aoulaad kite jad rove,, ammi de akhiyon neer v chove
putt ro haar ke sove,, raat nu uth uth ohnu tohve

fir put vadda kar viyaheya, aounde nouh ne rang vikhayea
maa di gutt nu jaa hath payea, sharm hya da parda laheya
putt ne jra naa ros mnayea,naa rondi nu chup krayea
jiyonda rahe tu kukh de jayea, dudh da changa karza laheya

aayi raat te 11 waje,, putt vekhe khabe sajje
gal kahi jo gharwali, o sun ke kider nu bhajje

gharwali kehndi tu mera, pyaar bht hai maa naal tera
j tu pyaar chouna e methon, kar ik kam te rakhla jera

putt ne haan vich sir jhukayea, ਪੁੱਟ kadam nu maa wal dhayea
kehnda nouh teri hai mangdi "kaalja" jine tenu jaayea

maan ne karke nain aloye, hath jor ke rab wal doye
kiti ardaas keha rab agge,,ro ro pe gaye akhan ch toye
hath vich maa ne "khanjar" fadeya, maa nu jra na gusa chadeya
putt nu reej naal jra tak ke,, "khanjar" aag vich jad sadeya

tikha vekh "khanjar" 2 dhaara,, maan ne hiq vich "khanjar" maara
maa ne khoon naa kapde range,,putt nu ik vaar fer pukaara

putt de save maa saah le gayi, jigre nu jigra de gayi
hath vich maa da jigra fadke, maa puut da bol v seh gayi

kahli naal putt bhajja,, theda lagga te kandh vich vajja
maa maa muho pukkare,, gitta wahwa suj giya sajja

hathon chut giya maa da jigra, putt,, nouh piche, lag bigra
ik awaaz jehi fir aayi, jigre nu kehnda jigra

putt dhiyaan naal tu chal ve,, uche rehn tere mhal ve
tu rave sada sehzada,, kan khol ke sunla gal ve

heraan ho jad takeya,, riha chup bol na sakeya
putt sat te ni laggi meri jaan nu ehe sun ke jigar fer chakeya

gayi tadf "pReEt" di rooh ji, par maa te shad gayi jooh ji
kithon aayi te kithe gayi,, aaj tak mili naa sooh ji

rabba rakhi salamat maavan,, sade sir utte ehe shaavan
bade ehsaan maa ne kite,, o kive dilon bhulaava ?

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