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Old 9th June 2010, 07:31 PM
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Thumbs up Copy ਕਰਨ ਨੂੰ ਮਿੰਟ-ਸਕਿੰਟ

ਕੋਈ ਸੱਟ ਲੱਗੀ ਤੇ ਲਿੱਖਦਾ ਹੈ ,,

ਕੋਈ ਲਿਖਣਾ ਇਸ਼ਕ 'ਚੋਂ ਸਿੱਖਦਾ ਹੈ ..ਕੋਈ ਕਰੇ ਜ਼ਿਕਰ ਉਸ ਹਾਲਾਤ ਦਾ ,,

ਜੋ ਅੱਖਾਂ ਮੂਹਰੇ ਦਿੱਖਦਾ ਹੈ ..

ਇਸ ਕਲਮ ਰਾਹੀਂ ਕਈ ਲੋਕੀ ਦਿਲ ਆਪਣੇ ਦਾ ਹਾਲ ਸੁਣਾਉਂਦੇ ਨੇ ..
ਪਰ ਲੋਕੀ Copy ਕਰਨ ਨੂੰ ਮਿੰਟ-ਸਕਿੰਟ ਹੀ ਲਾਉਂਦੇ ਨੇ ...
ਮੇਰੇ ਲਿਖੇ ਜ਼ਜਬਾਤਾਂ ਤੇ ਅੱਜ ਉਹ ਨਾਮ ਆਪਣਾ ਉਲੀਕ ਰਿਹਾ ..
ਜੋ ਮੈਨੁੰ ਸੀ ਮਿਲਣੇ ਚਾਹੀਦੇ ਉਹਨਾਂ Comments ਨੂੰ ਉਹ ਉਡੀਕ ਰਿਹਾ ..
ਸਾਰੀਆਂ ਸਤਰਾਂ ਉਹੀ ਨੇ ਬਸ ਇਕ ਨਾਮ ਹੀ ਬਦਲਾਉਂਦੇ ਨੇ ...
ਇੱਥੇ ਲੋਕੀ Copy ਕਰਨ ਨੂੰ ਮਿੰਟ-ਸਕਿੰਟ ਹੀ ਲਾਉਂਦੇ ਨੇ ...
ਇੱਥੇ ਮਿਊਜ਼ਕ ਵੀ Copy ਹੁੰਦੇ ਨੇ ,,
Copy ਕਰਦੇ ਫ਼ਿਲਮ ਦੀ ਸਟੋਰੀ ਨੂੰ ..
ਕੋਈ ਕੰਮ Creative ਕਰਨਾ ਨੀ ਸਾਰਾ ਦਿਮਾਗ਼ ਲੱਗਿਆ ਕਰਨ 'ਚ ਚੋਰੀ ਨੂੰ ..
ਬੋਤਲ ਕਿਸੇ ਦੀ , ਦਾਰੂ ਕਿਸੇ ਦੀ, ਬਸ ਲੇਬਲ ਆਪਣਾ ਚਿਪਕਾਉਂਦੇ ਨੇ ..
ਇੱਥੇ ਲੋਕੀ Copy ਕਰਨ ਨੂੰ ਮਿੰਟ-ਸਕਿੰਟ ਹੀ ਲਾਉਂਦੇ ਨੇ ...
(Tarlok Singh Judge V/S Satinder Sartaj -- PP is Punjabipotral Site)
ਹੁਣ ਸੁਣਿਆ ਰੌਲਾ ਸ਼ਾਇਰ ਦਾ ਇਕ ਸ਼ਾਇਰ ਨਾਲ ਹੀ ਪੈ ਗਿਆ ..
ਉਹਨਾਂ ਦੀਆਂ ਲਿਖੀਆਂ ਪੰਕਤੀਆਂ ਨੂੰ ਆਪਣੇ ਗੀਤਾਂ 'ਚ ਕਹਿ ਗਿਆ ..
ਇਸ ਉਲਝੀ ਗੱਲ ਸੁਲਝਾਉਣ ਲਈ PP ਵਾਲੇ ਅੱਗੇ ਆਉਂਦੇ ਨੇ ...
ਇੱਥੇ ਲੋਕੀ PP ਵਾਲਿਆਂ ਤੇ ਇਕ ਤਰਫ਼ਾ ਹੋਣ ਦਾ ਦੋਸ਼ ਲਾਉਂਦੇ ਨੇ ..
ਇਹ ਸਭ ਲਿਖਣ ਵਾਲੇ "GILL" ਦੀ ਵੀ ਗੱਲ ਕਿਸੇ ਤੋਂ ਲੁੱਕੀ ਨੀ ..
ਇਹ ਕਹਿਣਾ ਝੂਠ ਹੋਊ ਇਹਨੇ Line ਕੋਈ ਕਿਸੇ ਸ਼ਾਇਰ ਦੀ ਚੁੱਕੀ ਨੀ ..
ਵੱਖਰੀ Theme ਦੇ Idea ਬੱਬੂ ਮਾਨ ਦੇ ਦਿਮਾਗ਼ 'ਚ ਹੀ ਆਉਂਦੇ ਨੇ ..
ਕਈ Singer ਉਸੇ ਨੂੰ Copy ਕਰ ਮਿੰਟ-ਸਕਿੰਟ 'ਚ ਗਾਣਾ ਬਣਾਉਂਦੇ ਨੇ ..
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ਬਹੁਤ ਵਧੀਆ ਜੀ.....ਬਿੱਲਕੁਲ ਸਹੀ ਗੱਲ ਆ ਜੀ......ਇਹ ਕੰਮ ਤਾਂ ਪਹਿਲਾਂ ਕਰਦੇ ਨੇ ਲੋਕ..............
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Bilkul sahi keha g tuc........eh kam tan chor sabh ton pehlan karde ne......ohna nu ki pata ki shayar kiven appne dil nu akhraan vich pirro k kagaz te uleek da ne.......ohna nu tan bas poetry chakkan da pata hai,,, hor kujh nai......


Ur poetry is very nyc.......its really gr8.......
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but ehe Sartaaj waal ki raula?? Plz Elaborate......
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Sahi gall a ji... ethe DC te vi 70% eda hi karde.. na koyi

moderator na super moderator dhyaan dinda... ki threads nu move keeta jave...
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sorry bro.....main koi moderator ya super moderator nahi par fer v main inform karan di duty kar reha haan.....main mod ya super mod nu inform kar dina hunda haan je koi thread wrng section vich hunda hai.........
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