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Old 15th October 2009, 02:38 AM
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Unhappy Raat di tanhayi....

Jado raat di tanhayi menu kosdi hoyi menu jagaundi hai,
tan me raat to kuj savaal puchda han,
ki
mera kasoor tan das,
kyon menu son nahi dindi ,
kyon har raat meri vilkdeyan di lngdi hai,
kyon eni der raat v ena shor sunaai dinda hai menu,
tan raat menu akhaan dikhaundi hoyi kehndi hai,

k oye
bekdra
kise di neend kho k mere ton neend mngda hai,
kise nu hanju de k mere ton hase mng reha hai,

Tan mein usnu yaad divaunda han,
ki mein kise nu hanju nahi dite
me tan apne pyar ton pkka vada liya c te usne v vada kabooldeyan kiha c ,
"ki Jaan.. na mein tenu yaad karangi te na hi kade rovangi tu jana hai tan chla ja"

TE ME V US NU DILO KEH K AYA C K "KHUSH RAHI"

Ena sunke raat jor jor naal hasdi hai mere te kehndi hai ki tu javaab chaunda hai na tan sun

Eh jo tenu ajeeb shor sunai dinda hai na...
eh ohna vadeyan de tuttan da shor hai jo vade le ke tu apne pyar nu chad aya hai,
jo vade oh pl -pl tod rahi hai,

eh jo hanju teriyan akhan ch ne eh tere nahi eh usde ne ,
kyon ki usdiyan akhan tan kado diyan suk gayian ne
,te teri tanhayi teri sja hai,
us nek rooh nu tadpaun di ,jo tenu rab smjhi bethi c,

ena keh k raat jaan lgdi hai tan mein rat nu rokan dikoshish krda han te kehnda han
ki
oh hi mere kol ruk jave
mere naal galan krlave
menu ikalla na chade,

tan raat kehndi hai"
"NA BHAI TERE NAAL PYAR NAHI PAUNA
TERA KI PTA KIS MOD TE MERE TON DO -CHAR VADE LE MENU V CHAD JAVE
te aakh jave
"KHUSH RAHI"

plz kade v kise nal ada na karo ki us da dukh tuhanu jeen na deve ,
asi ta sab jar lea sayad koi hor pam ada na jare plzzzzzzzzzz.
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Old 21st October 2009, 04:47 PM
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plz kade v kise nal ada na karo ki us da dukh tuhanu jeen na deve ,
asi ta sab jar lea sayad koi hor pam ada na jare plzzzzzzzzzz.


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superb....relly nice...
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Old 21st October 2009, 06:42 PM
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very heart touching............thanks
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bahut ghat lok ena galan nu samjhde ne kise nu jina dil ch vasayie thodi der baad ohi banda jadan ch aari ferda hai .......................its true.................
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bohat hi jiyada very heart touching ........................kuj kehna chahva ga

Koi kisi ke dard me shaamil nahi hai
har ada husan ke kabil nahi hai
sab kuch luta kar samajh me aaya
A duniya pyar ke kaabil nahi hai.
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bohat hi jiyada very heart touching ........................kuj kehna chahva ga

Koi kisi ke dard me shaamil nahi hai
har ada husan ke kabil nahi hai
sab kuch luta kar samajh me aaya
A duniya pyar ke kaabil nahi hai.
thxxxxxx ji ad shi keha ji A duniya pyar ke kaabil nahi hai.
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