Home | Blog | Flash | Forum | Jokes | Poems | Quotes | Riddles | Screensavers | SMS | Videos | Wallpapers
DC Forum
Go Back   DC Forum > Desi Zone > Punjabi Poetry > Self Written Punjabi Poetry
Reload this Page ਕੋਸ਼ਿਸ਼...
Forgot Password? Register
Register Games Invite FAQ Members List Calendar Smilies Sudoku Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Reply
Page 1 of 3 1 23
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread
  #1  
Old 13th September 2009, 09:27 AM
brar malke's Avatar
brar malke brar malke is offline
jatt putt
  
Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: malke{punjab}, now in calgary,alberta
Posts: 3,141
Thanks: 313
Thanked 1,219 Times in 378 Posts
brar malke has much to be proud ofbrar malke has much to be proud ofbrar malke has much to be proud ofbrar malke has much to be proud ofbrar malke has much to be proud ofbrar malke has much to be proud ofbrar malke has much to be proud ofbrar malke has much to be proud ofbrar malke has much to be proud ofbrar malke has much to be proud of

Love

Send a message via MSN to brar malke
Exclamation ਕੋਸ਼ਿਸ਼...
ਹਰ ਪਲ ਤੈਨੂੰ ਹੀ ਯਾਦ ਕਰਦਾ ਹਾਂ,,.
ਅੱਜ ਵੀ ਆਪਣੇ ਦਿਲ ਨੂੰ ਪਰਚਾਉਣ ਦੀ ਕੋਸ਼ਿਸ਼ ਦਿਨ ਰਾਤ ਕਰਦਾ ਹਾਂ,
ਠੀਕ ਹੈਂ ਤੂੰ ਵੀ ਆਪਣੀ ਜਗਾਹ,..
ਮੈ ਆਪਣੇ ਆਪ ਨੂੰ ਸਹੀ ਸਾਬਿਤ ਕਰਨ ਦੀ ਕੋਸ਼ਿਸ਼ ਦਿਨ ਰਾਤ ਕਰਦਾ ਹਾਂ,..
ਤੂੰ ਕਹਿ ਦਿਤਾ ਕਿ ਮੈਨੂੰ ਤੰਗ ਹੁਣ ਨਾ ਕਰੀਂ,.
ਮੈ ਚੁੱਪ ਹੋ ਗਿਆ,..
ਪਰ ਤੂੰ ਕੀ ਜਾਣੇਂ ਕਿ ਆਪਣੀ ਚੁੱਪ ਨਾਲ ਕਿੰਨੀ ਦਫ਼ਾ ਮੈਂ ਗੱਲ ਬਾਤ ਕਰਦਾ ਹਾਂ,.
ਤੇਰੇ ਨਾਲ ਕੀ ਰਿਸ਼ਤਾ ਹੈ ਮੇਰਾ ਮੈਂ ਅੱਜ ਤੱਕ ਸਮਝ ਨਹੀਂ ਸਕਿਆ,.
ਪਰ ਇੱਕ ਗੱਲ ਜ਼ਰੂਰ ਹੈ "ਬਰਾੜ"
ਕਿ ਅੱਜ ਵੀ ਸੁਪਨੇ ਵਿੱਚ ਤੇਰੇ ਨਾਲ ਮੁਲਾਕਾਤ ਕਰਦਾ ਹਾਂ,...
__________________
ਵਾਹਿਗੁਰੂ ਮੇਹਰ ਕਰੀੰ,.
Reply With Quote
The Following 5 Users Say Thank You to brar malke For This Useful Post:
  #2  
Old 13th September 2009, 01:05 PM
GURI Ludhianvi's Avatar
GURI Ludhianvi GURI Ludhianvi is offline
Renowned Desi
  
Join Date: Apr 2009
Location: Ludhiana (Punjab)
Posts: 11,998
Thanks: 1,307
Thanked 1,101 Times in 215 Posts
GURI Ludhianvi has a brilliant futureGURI Ludhianvi has a brilliant futureGURI Ludhianvi has a brilliant futureGURI Ludhianvi has a brilliant futureGURI Ludhianvi has a brilliant futureGURI Ludhianvi has a brilliant futureGURI Ludhianvi has a brilliant futureGURI Ludhianvi has a brilliant futureGURI Ludhianvi has a brilliant futureGURI Ludhianvi has a brilliant futureGURI Ludhianvi has a brilliant future

Sad

Default
vadhiya ji...
__________________

ਨਬਜ਼ ਵੇਖਣ ਲਈ ਨਜ਼ਮਾਂ ਰੱਖੀਆਂ ਟੀਕੇ ਲਾਏ ਰੁਬਾਈਆਂ ਦੇ,
ਖੇਤਾਂ ਦੇ ਵਿੱਚ ਪਾ ਲਈ ਕੁੱਲੀ ਸ਼ਾਇਰੀ ਦਿਆਂ ਸ਼ੁਦਾਈਆਂ ਨੇ,
ਇਸ਼ਕੇ ਦਿਆਂ ਮਰੀਜ਼ਾ ਦੇ ਲਈ ਰੱਖੀਆਂ ਖਾਸ ਦਵਾਈਆਂ ਨੇ...


Reply With Quote
  #3  
Old 13th September 2009, 01:12 PM
Param Sandhu's Avatar
Param Sandhu Param Sandhu is offline
Risky Jatti
  
Join Date: Dec 2008
Location: Apne Ghar tu dur
Posts: 9,744
Thanks: 1,205
Thanked 728 Times in 186 Posts
Param Sandhu has a brilliant futureParam Sandhu has a brilliant futureParam Sandhu has a brilliant futureParam Sandhu has a brilliant futureParam Sandhu has a brilliant futureParam Sandhu has a brilliant futureParam Sandhu has a brilliant futureParam Sandhu has a brilliant futureParam Sandhu has a brilliant futureParam Sandhu has a brilliant futureParam Sandhu has a brilliant future

Flirty

Default
wah ji wah....tooooo gud.....
__________________
Reply With Quote
  #4  
Old 13th September 2009, 02:29 PM
gurpreet singh's Avatar
gurpreet singh gurpreet singh is offline
Absolutely Desi
  
Join Date: Jan 2009
Location: london/luton/uk
Posts: 3,102
Thanks: 1,031
Thanked 906 Times in 264 Posts
gurpreet singh has much to be proud ofgurpreet singh has much to be proud ofgurpreet singh has much to be proud ofgurpreet singh has much to be proud ofgurpreet singh has much to be proud ofgurpreet singh has much to be proud ofgurpreet singh has much to be proud ofgurpreet singh has much to be proud ofgurpreet singh has much to be proud ofgurpreet singh has much to be proud of
Default
veri gud veeeeer ji
__________________
Reply With Quote
  #5  
Old 13th September 2009, 07:34 PM
brar malke's Avatar
brar malke brar malke is offline
jatt putt
  
Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: malke{punjab}, now in calgary,alberta
Posts: 3,141
Thanks: 313
Thanked 1,219 Times in 378 Posts
brar malke has much to be proud ofbrar malke has much to be proud ofbrar malke has much to be proud ofbrar malke has much to be proud ofbrar malke has much to be proud ofbrar malke has much to be proud ofbrar malke has much to be proud ofbrar malke has much to be proud ofbrar malke has much to be proud ofbrar malke has much to be proud of

Love

Send a message via MSN to brar malke
Default
thanx frds,..
__________________
ਵਾਹਿਗੁਰੂ ਮੇਹਰ ਕਰੀੰ,.
Reply With Quote
  #6  
Old 13th September 2009, 07:37 PM
stylishheer's Avatar
stylishheer stylishheer is offline
Prospering Desi
  
Join Date: May 2009
Location: kokri kalan,moga
Posts: 1,127
Thanks: 250
Thanked 77 Times in 30 Posts
stylishheer is a jewel in the roughstylishheer is a jewel in the roughstylishheer is a jewel in the roughstylishheer is a jewel in the rough

Cheerful

Default
nice share...........
__________________
ਆਦਮੀ ਮਜ਼ਹਬ ਲਈ ਕਰਦਾ ਹੈ ਕਿਓਂ ਬੰਦੇ ਦਾ ਖ਼ੂਨ,
ਜਦ ਕਿ ਮਜ਼ਹਬ ਸਿਰਫ਼ ਇਕ ਰਸਤਾ ਹੈ ਬਾਕੀ ਕੁਝ ਨਹੀਂ |
ਰਿਸ਼ਤਿਆਂ ਦੇ ਚੱਕਰਾਂ ਵਿੱਚ ਘਿਰ ਗਏ ਦੀਵਾਨਿਓਂ!
ਆਦਮੀਅਤ ਹੀ ਬੜਾ ਰਿਸ਼ਤਾ ਹੈ ਬਾਕੀ ਕੁਝ ਨਹੀਂ |
Reply With Quote
  #7  
Old 13th September 2009, 07:40 PM
brar malke's Avatar
brar malke brar malke is offline
jatt putt
  
Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: malke{punjab}, now in calgary,alberta
Posts: 3,141
Thanks: 313
Thanked 1,219 Times in 378 Posts
brar malke has much to be proud ofbrar malke has much to be proud ofbrar malke has much to be proud ofbrar malke has much to be proud ofbrar malke has much to be proud ofbrar malke has much to be proud ofbrar malke has much to be proud ofbrar malke has much to be proud ofbrar malke has much to be proud ofbrar malke has much to be proud of

Love

Send a message via MSN to brar malke
Default
thanx heer g,.
__________________
ਵਾਹਿਗੁਰੂ ਮੇਹਰ ਕਰੀੰ,.
Reply With Quote
  #8  
Old 13th September 2009, 07:58 PM
_ρυяє ρυηנαвαη_'s Avatar
_ρυяє ρυηנαвαη_ _ρυяє ρυηנαвαη_ is offline
_ਜੱਟੀ 25ਆਂ ਮੁਰੱਬਿਆਂ ਵਾਲੀ_
  
Join Date: Jun 2009
Location: _dElH!_
Posts: 16,752
Thanks: 2,418
Thanked 2,417 Times in 720 Posts
_ρυяє ρυηנαвαη_ has a brilliant future_ρυяє ρυηנαвαη_ has a brilliant future_ρυяє ρυηנαвαη_ has a brilliant future_ρυяє ρυηנαвαη_ has a brilliant future_ρυяє ρυηנαвαη_ has a brilliant future_ρυяє ρυηנαвαη_ has a brilliant future_ρυяє ρυηנαвαη_ has a brilliant future_ρυяє ρυηנαвαη_ has a brilliant future_ρυяє ρυηנαвαη_ has a brilliant future_ρυяє ρυηנαвαη_ has a brilliant future_ρυяє ρυηנαвαη_ has a brilliant future
Default
vadhiyaaa g...
__________________

σн уєѕ ι ∂σ нανє αη αттιтυ∂є вυт у ιтz вσтнєяιηg υ

Reply With Quote
  #9  
Old 13th September 2009, 08:19 PM
jeeti's Avatar
jeeti jeeti is offline
Prospering Desi
  
Join Date: Feb 2009
Location: LUDHIANA
Posts: 2,120
Thanks: 365
Thanked 426 Times in 97 Posts
jeeti is a splendid one to beholdjeeti is a splendid one to beholdjeeti is a splendid one to beholdjeeti is a splendid one to beholdjeeti is a splendid one to beholdjeeti is a splendid one to beholdjeeti is a splendid one to beholdjeeti is a splendid one to behold

Cheeky

Default
ਬਹੁਤ ਹੀ ਵਧੀਆ ਜੀ
__________________
ਸਾਰੀ ਉਮਰ ਨੀ ਦੇ ਸਕਦੇ ਪੁੱਤ ਕਰਜੇ ਮਾਵਾਂ ਦੇ

www.ranjeet-jeeti29.webs.com


ਤੇਰੇ ਪਰਾ ਚ ਰਹਿਣੀ ਜਦ ਤਕ ਉਡਾਣ ਬਾਕੀ,ਰਹਿੰਣੇ ਨੇ ਉਦੋ ਤੀਕਰ ਇਹ ਇਮਤਿਹਾਨ ਬਾਕੀ |
ਦੇਖੀ ਤੁ ਕਿਥੇ ਹਾਲੇ ਮੇਰੀ ਸ਼ੌਕ ਦੀ ਬਲੰਦੀ,ਅਕਾਸ਼ ਮੁੱਕ ਗਿਆ ਹੈ ਹਾਲੇ ਉਡਾਣ ਬਾਕੀ,|
Reply With Quote
  #10  
Old 13th September 2009, 08:24 PM
jass makkar's Avatar
jass makkar jass makkar is offline
Senior Desi
  
Join Date: May 2009
Location: Patiala
Posts: 5,484
Thanks: 357
Thanked 933 Times in 212 Posts
jass makkar has much to be proud ofjass makkar has much to be proud ofjass makkar has much to be proud ofjass makkar has much to be proud ofjass makkar has much to be proud ofjass makkar has much to be proud ofjass makkar has much to be proud ofjass makkar has much to be proud ofjass makkar has much to be proud ofjass makkar has much to be proud of

Aggressive

Default
bhut vadiaa brar ji....
__________________
ਕੰਮ ਕਿਸੇ ਦੇ ਆਉਣੇ ਵਾਲੇ ਨਹੀਂ,ਕਿਤੇ ਪੂਰੀ ਪਾਉਣੇ ਵਾਲੇ ਨਹੀਂ

ਬਸ ਭੁੱਲੇ-ਵਿਸਰੇ ਚੰਗੇ ਆਂ ਸਾਨੂੰ ਯਾਦ ਕਰਨ ਦੀ ਲੋੜ ਨਹੀਂ
Reply With Quote
Reply
Page 1 of 3 1 23

« Previous Thread | Next Thread »
Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts
BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off


All times are GMT +5.5. The time now is 01:07 AM.

Contact Us - DC Forum - Archive - Privacy Statement - Top

Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.4
Copyright ©2000 - 2013, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
DesiComments.com
Desi Painters | Desi Quotes | Desi Wallpapers | Desi Junks | Funny Junk Site | Indian Recipes | Myspace Comments | Orkut Glitters | Quotes Graphics
no new posts