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Old 3rd July 2009, 06:48 AM
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ਲਾਈ ਜਿਹਨਾਂ ਨਾਲ ਯਾਰੀ ਓਹ ਹੀ ਗੈਰ ਬਣ ਬਹਿ ਗਏ,..
ਦਰਦ ਦੇਣ ਵਾਲੇ ਹੀ ਬੇਦਰਦ ਸਾਨੂੰ ਕਹਿ ਗਏ ...
ਅਸੀ ਤਾਂ ਨਿਭਾਉਂਦੇ ਰਹੇ ਯਾਰ ਸੱਚਾ ਜਾਣ ਕੇ
ਓਹੋ ਜਾਂਦੇ-੨ ਦਗੇਬਾਜ਼ ਸਾਨੂੰ ਕਹਿ ਗਏ,..
ਦਰਦ ਦੇਣ ਵਾਲੇ ਹੀ............,||


ਸਾਡੀ ਗਲਤੀ ਨੂੰ ਗੁਨਾਹ ਕਹਿੰਦੇ.
ਆਪਣੇ ਆਪ ਨੂੰ ਮਜ੍ਬੂਰ ਦੱਸ੍ਣ
ਆਪ੍ਣੀ ਮਜ੍ਬੂਰੀ ਦੇ ਵਿੱਚ ਵੀ
ਓਹ ਸਾਡਾ ਹੀ ਕਸੂਰ ਦੱਸ੍ਣ
ਰੁੱਸ੍ਣਾ ਸੀ ਅਸੀਂ ਓਹ ਆਪ ਰੁੱਸ ਬਹਿ ਗਏ,..
ਦਰਦ ਦੇਣ ਵਾਲੇ ਹੀ.........,..||


ਹਰ ਪਲ ਜਿਹੜੇ ਪਰਛਾਵੇਂ ਵਾਂਗ ਨਾਲ ਰਹਿੰਦੇ ਸੀ,..
ਗੱਲ ਉੱਤੇ ਲੜਦੇ ਵੀ ਰਹਿੰਦੇ ਸੀ,..
ਕਦੇ ਸੌਖੇ ਹੀ ਮੰਨ ਜਾਂਦੇ ਸੀ
ਜੋ ਅੱਜ ਐਨਾ ਦੂਰ ਹੋ ਕੇ ਬਹਿ ਗਏ,..
ਦਰਦ ਦੇਣ ਵਾਲੇ ਹੀ ,.......||


ਓਹਨਾਂ ਤੋ ਬਿਨਾਂ ਮੇਰੀ ਜ਼ਿੰਦਗੀ ਅਧੂਰੀ ਏ,..
ਮੈਥੋਂ ਦੂਰ ਹੋਣਾ ਖੌਰੇ ਓਹਨਾਂ ਦੀ ਮਰਜ਼ੀ ਯਾ ਮਜ੍ਬੂਰੀ ਏ,..
ਕੁਝ ਸਮ੍ਝ ਨਾ ਆਵੇ ਪਤਾ ਹੀ ਨਾ ਲੱਗੇ
ਕਿ ਓਹ ਕਿਹ੍ੜੀ ਗੱਲੋਂ ਦਗਾ ਸਾਨੂੰ ਦੇ ਗਏ,..
ਦਰਦ ਦੇਣ ਵਾਲੇ ਹੀ ,.......||


ਕਦੇ ਕਿਸੇ ਵੇਲੇ ਦਿੱਤੀਆਂ ਜੋ ਮੈਂ ਛੱਲੇ,ਮੁੰਦੀਆਂ ਤੇ ਗਾਨੀਆਂ ,
ਅੱਜ ਮੋੜ ਗਏ ਸਾਨੂੰ ਓਹ ਸਭੇ ਹੀ ਨਿਸ਼ਾਨੀਆਂ,.
ਜਾਂਦੇ-੨ "ਬਰਾੜ" ਸਾਨੂੰ ਭੁੱਲ ਜਾਵੀਂ ਕਹਿ ਗਏ,..
ਦਰਦ ਦੇਣ ਵਾਲੇ ਹੀ ,.......||
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