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Old 17th August 2009, 07:18 PM
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Default ਕੌਣ ਕਿਸ ਨੂੰ ਦਿਲ ਵਿੱਚ ਜਗਾਹ ਦੇਦਾ ਏ..

ਕੌਣ ਕਿਸ ਨੂੰ ਦਿਲ ਵਿੱਚ ਜਗਾਹ ਦੇਦਾ ਏ..
ਰੁੱਖ ਵੀ ਸੁੱਕੇ ਪੱਤਿਆ ਨੂੰ ਗਿਰਾ ਦੇਦਾ ਏ..
ਵਾਕਿਫ ਹਾਂ ਏਸ ਦੁਨਿਆ ਦੇ ਰਿਵਾਜ਼ਾ ਤੋਂ..
ਜੀ ਭਰ ਜਾਵੇ ਤਾਂ ਹਰ ਕੋਈ ਭੁਲਾ ਦੇਦਾ ਏ..
ਸਦਾ ਰਹਾਗਾਂ ਏ "ਦੋਸਤ" ਮੈ ਤੇਰਾ "ਹਮਦਰਦ" ਬਣਕੇ....
ਨਿਭਾਉਣੀ "ਦੋਸਤੀ" ਏਹੋ ਏ ..ਦੋਸਤ "ਰੀਤ" ਆਸਾਡੀ...
ਹਾਸੇ ਵਿੱਚ ਬੇਸ਼ੱਕ ਕੁਝ ਕਹਿ ਜਾਈਏ.........
ਪਰ ਬੁਰੀ ਨਹੀ ਏ...ਦੋਸਤ "ਨੀਅਤ" ਆਸਾਡੀ...
ਜੇਕਰ ਪਹੁੰਚੇ ਠੇਸ ਤੇਰੇ "ਜ਼ਜਬਾਤਾਂ" ਨੂੰ....
ਏ ਦੋਸਤ ਮੇਰੀ ਕਿਸੇ ਗੱਲ ਤੋਂ....ਤਾਂ...
"ਮੁਆਫ" ਕਰ ਦੇਵੀ..."ਪਰੀਤ"...ਨੂੰ.....ਤੂੰ...
ਸਮਝ ਕੇ ਨਿਮਾਣੀ ਜਿਹੀ "ਪਰੀਤ" ਆਸਾਡੀ....
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Old 17th August 2009, 07:20 PM
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ਕੌਣ ਕਿਸ ਨੂੰ ਦਿਲ ਵਿੱਚ ਜਗਾਹ ਦੇਦਾ ਏ..
ਰੁੱਖ ਵੀ ਸੁੱਕੇ ਪੱਤਿਆ ਨੂੰ ਗਿਰਾ ਦੇਦਾ ਏ..
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bahut sohna likhea janaab....bilkul sahi gall kiti hai jee

waah.......bahut khoob

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Old 17th August 2009, 07:24 PM
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Bahut vadhiya e Preet ji...

ਅਲਫ਼ਾਜ਼ ਵਧੀਆ ਚੁਣੇ ਨੇ ਜੀ.... ਪੇਸ਼ ਕਰਨ ਦੀ ਜੋ ਅਦਾ ਹੈ.. ਵਧੀਆ ਹੈ....
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ਖੇਤਾਂ ਦੇ ਵਿੱਚ ਪਾ ਲਈ ਕੁੱਲੀ ਸ਼ਾਇਰੀ ਦਿਆਂ ਸ਼ੁਦਾਈਆਂ ਨੇ,
ਇਸ਼ਕੇ ਦਿਆਂ ਮਰੀਜ਼ਾ ਦੇ ਲਈ ਰੱਖੀਆਂ ਖਾਸ ਦਵਾਈਆਂ ਨੇ...

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bohat vadiya ji sada g kade nai bhar sakda us dc wali to
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hahhahhaha thanks g,,,,,,,,,,,,
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really heart touching preet ,,,,,thanks for sharing ,,,,likhde raho sis ji
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