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Old 10th July 2009, 03:58 PM
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Aaj tu rusya te eh shaam mainu kuch udas jihi lagi,

pyase naina nu kyun tenu dekhan de ek pyas jihi lagi



vishwas hi ek sahara c sade dohan de pyar da,

aaj kyun usde vich payi ek darar jihi lagi



bahut rawaya c lokaan ne mainu,

lekin tere naal zindagi jeen d ek aas jihi lagi



sach kiha c hamesha mai, loki jhooth dasde rahe

aaj fer kyun ek sach nu jhooth kehan layi teri ayi awaz jihi lagi





mainu shikayat tere to koi nhi shona

meri zindagi vich burayian d hamesha payi barsat hi lagi





tu sochenga mai tenu sunan lag payi apni kahani

par sach kahan shona , tu rusya ta eh jagah mainu ek shamshaan jihi lagi





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Thanks g, tuhanu sab nu wadiya lagdi hai ta bas mainu v likhan da mazza aanda hai... Thanks a lot
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bahut bahut wadiya lina
"sach kiha c hamesha mai, loki jhooth dasde rahe

aaj fer kyun ek sach nu jhooth kehan layi teri ayi awaz jihi lagi



tu sochenga mai tenu sunan lag payi apni kahani

par sach kahan shona , tu rusya ta eh jagah mainu ek shamshaan jihi lagi
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