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Old 23rd July 2012, 10:25 PM
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Ik sama c ke tera mere bina dil nahi c lagda

Aaj sama eh aayea sanu bulauna tu shad ta

Rabb kare mere bina rahe sada khush

Aasa hun rehna sari umar hi chup

Shayad like nhi c aasi tere pyaar de

Tahi *duniya de lok menu mehne marde

Aasi apne dil diya dil wich lai janiyaan

Bas ik yadaan ithe reh janiyaan

Hun nahi changa lagda eh jahan

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