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Old 15th November 2011, 07:50 PM
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ਤਕਦੀਰ ਚ ਵਿਛੋਡ਼ੇ ਵਾਲੀ ਲੀਕ ਪਾ ਚਲਿਆ
ਜਿਸਮ ਦੀ ਕਿ ਗਲ ਤੂੰ ਰੂਹ ਤੀਕ ਪਾ ਚਲਿਆ
ਉਮਰ ਭਰ ਸਜਦਾ ਤੈਨੂੰ ਕਰਨਾ ਜਿਨਾਂ
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ਤਕਦੀਰ ਚ ਵਿਛੋਡ਼ੇ ਵਾਲੀ ਲੀਕ ਪਾ ਚਲਿਆ
ਜਿਸਮ ਦੀ ਕਿ ਗਲ ਤੂੰ ਰੂਹ ਤੀਕ ਪਾ ਚਲਿਆ
ਉਮਰ ਭਰ ਸਜਦਾ ਤੈਨੂੰ ਕਰਨਾ ਜਿਨਾਂ
ਮੇਰੇ ਗੀਤਾਂ ਚ ਐਸੀ ਤੌਫੀਕ ਪਾ ਚਲਿਆ
ਮਰਕੇ ਵੀ ਨਾ ਹੋਣੀ ਜਿੰਦ ਇਹ ਆਰਜ਼ੂ ਖਤਮ
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