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Old 25th November 2011, 07:15 AM
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ਕਈ ਵਾਰ ਇੱਕਲਾ ਬਹਿ ਕੇ ਸੋਚਦਾ ਹਾ ਮੈਂ
ਕਿ
ਮੇਰੀ ਜਿੰਦਗੀ ਦੇ ਏਨੀਆ ( ਜ਼ਿਆਦਾ ) ਠੋਕਰਾ ਖ਼ਾਣ ਦੀ ਵਜਹ ( ਕਾਰਣ ) ਕੀ ਸੀ
ਪਰ ਗੱਲ ਹਰ ਵਾਰ ਉਹਦੇ ਪੈਰਾ ਦੇ ਨਿਸ਼ਾਨਾ ਤੇ ਆ ਕੇ ਰੁੱਕ ਜਾਂਦੀ ਆ ..
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Kyi Vaar Ikla Beh Ke Sochda Han MAin ...
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Meri Zindgi De Ineian (Jyada) Thokran Khan Di Vajah Ki c ...
Par Gal Haar Vaar Ohde Pairan De Nishaana Te Aa Ke Ruk Jandi aa ...

Plz Je koi Galti Hove tan Jrur Dasna ... Je Vdiya LAgge Tan V jrur Dasna ... PLzz
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