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Post ਜਦ ਮਰਦਾ ਇਸ਼ਕ ਚ' ਗਰੀਬ ਹੋਣਾ

ਜਿੰਨਾ ਤੂੰ ਮੇਰੇ ਤੂੰ ਦੂਰ ਹੋਣਾ,
ਉਨਾਂ ਮੈ ਮੌਤ ਦੇ ਕਰੀਬ ਹੋਣਾ,
ਦੁੱਖ ਤੈਨੂੰ ਵੀ ਤਾਂ ਜਰੂਰ ਹੋਣਾ,
ਜਦ ਮਰਦਾ ਇਸ਼ਕ ਚ' ਗਰੀਬ ਹੋਣਾ,
ਤੈਨੂੰ ਕਿਸੇ ਗੈਰ ਦਾ ਜਦ ਸਰੂਰ ਹੋਣਾ,
ਪਰ ਉਹੀ ਬਣਿਆ ਸਾਡਾ ਰਕੀਬ ਹੋਣਾ,
ਜਦ ਦਿੱਲ "ਗੁਰਪ੍ਰੀਤ ਬਹਿਬਬਲਪੁਰੀਏ ਦਾ ਚੂਰੋ-ਚੂਰ ਹੋਣਾ,
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ਜਿੰਨਾ ਤੂੰ ਮੇਰੇ ਤੂੰ ਦੂਰ ਹੋਣਾ,
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ਜਿੰਨਾ ਤੂੰ ਮੇਰੇ ਤੂੰ ਦੂਰ ਹੋਣਾ,
ਉਨਾਂ ਮੈ ਮੌਤ ਦੇ ਕਰੀਬ ਹੋਣਾ,
ਦੁੱਖ ਤੈਨੂੰ ਵੀ ਤਾਂ ਜਰੂਰ ਹੋਣਾ,
ਜਦ ਮਰਦਾ ਇਸ਼ਕ ਚ' ਗਰੀਬ ਹੋਣਾ,
ਤੈਨੂੰ ਕਿਸੇ ਗੈਰ ਦਾ ਜਦ ਸਰੂਰ ਹੋਣਾ,
ਪਰ ਉਹੀ ਬਣਿਆ ਸਾਡਾ ਰਕੀਬ ਹੋਣਾ,
ਜਦ ਦਿੱਲ "ਗੁਰਪ੍ਰੀਤ ਬਹਿਬਬਲਪੁਰੀਏ ਦਾ ਚੂਰੋ-ਚੂਰ ਹੋਣਾ,
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