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kidan karz uttaranga DC ve tera main....
sab nuu tain bakhsiyan tarakiyan, ohna sab layi tera sukhar kidan manawanga main.... ethe kaiyan ne mitaiyan apniyan dusmaniyan.... kaiyan ne tere naal awdiii zindagii de pal likh ke kawitawan kite sanje.... tahiyon teriyan rehndiyan chadaiyan harr passe .... lakhan ethe aa ke lende ne nazare pad ke kawitawan.... sare hiii ethe mere wadde pen pai haige ne likhari.... main kina da naam ginawan .... jehda tainu ikk warii khol lainda.... pae janda tere naall moh ohda.... chahe sare kam pull janda.... par pullda naa tainu kholna.... meri eho hai ardaas raab agge ke DC nu puri saflta bakhsi.... hor koi site na iss agge tik pawe chahe mukabla karr len lakhi.... meri baentii sab DC members agge, ke iss nu apni wad ton wad poetry pa ke nikhar dena.... tan ke koi hor site na maar sake iss nu mahena..... rakhna DC da paa ke sare jag utte rohb.... rakhna iss nu ena kaim bana ke, ke koi hor site kadd sake na iss wich khot.....
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() very nyc g...........
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wah ji wah kya likheya janab,,,,,,
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oo balle 22 ji
bahut vadiya likhiya................
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bohat hi wadia likhia veer
te naale fer DC IS THE BEST...... ![]() ![]() ![]() Very Well Written ![]() ![]()
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very nice
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bht changa laga..bht zabardest likha Punjabi poet.........
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Vry nice bro
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BAhut HI vadhia BAHUT BAHUT ...
LAGE RAHO PALLI VEER
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