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  1. 13th November 2011, 01:28 PM #1
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    ♥ ਉਹ " ਕਮਲੀ "ਚੋਰੀ-ਚੋਰੀ ਲੰਘਦੀ ਆ ਮੇਰੇ ਪਿੰਡ ਵਿੱਚ ਦੀ ♥
    ♥ ਮੈਨੂੰ ਵੇਖਣ ਦੇ ਲਈ ♥
    ♥ ਪਰ ਉਹ ਇਹ ਨਹੀ ਜਾਣਦੀ ♥
    ♥ ਕੀ ♥
    ♥ ਉਸਦਾ " ਪ੍ਰੀਤ " ਉਸਨੂੰ ਆਪਣੀ ਕਿਸਮਤ ਚ ਲਿਖਾਉਣ ਦੇ ਲਈ ਰੱਬ ਨੂੰ ਲੱਭਦਾ ਫਿਰਦਾ ♥

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    Oh " Kamli " Chori-Chori Langdi Aa Mere Pind Vich Di
    Mainu Vekhan De Lyi
    par Oh Eh Nahi Jandi
    Ki
    Osda Preet Osnu Apni Kisamt Vich Likhaun De Lyi Raab Nu Labhda Firda
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    ... KisMaT MaaRiYa De V ki SauDe Ooo RaBBa ...
    ...SaMRi'zzzzzzzZ...
    ... KDe TarSDe ReHnDe Aaa Te KDe TaDF-De ReHnDe Aaa ...

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  2. 13th November 2011, 01:37 PM #2
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    waah veer
    tusi eh aap likhde ho
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  3. 13th November 2011, 02:04 PM #3
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    hay ohey lba phir ke nai dear
    je rab laban na janda ta os de darshan ta ho jande



    no mind aaaaaaaaaaaaaah
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  4. 13th November 2011, 02:33 PM #4
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    ਸਿਖਰ ਦੁਪਿਹਰਾ ਸਿਰ ਤੇ ਮੇਰਾ ਢਲ ਚੱਲਿਆ ਪਰਛਾਵਾ
    ਕਬਰਾ ਉਡੀਕ ਦੀਆ ਮੈਨੂੰ ਜਿਉਂ ਪੁਤਰਾਂ ਨੂੰ ਮਾਵਾਂ
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    y ji raab bande ander wasda bhar kithe labda firda e

    but nice lines
    ਮੌਤ ਵੀ ਨਾਕਾਮ ਹੋ ਕੇ ਮੁੜ ਜਾਂਦੀ ਹੈ ਹਰ ਰੋਜ਼
    ਮੈਨੂੰ ਜ਼ਿੰਦਾ ਜੋ ਰਖਿਆ ਹੈ ਵਾਹਿਗੁਰੂ ਤੇਰੇ ਨਾਮ ਨੇ
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    well written...
    Weakness of attitude becomes weakness of character.

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    Quote Originally Posted by codename.47 View Post
    waah veer
    tusi eh aap likhde ho
    Dhanvaad veer .... kde-kde likh laine a 22
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    Quote Originally Posted by gavie brar View Post
    hay ohey lba phir ke nai dear
    je rab laban na janda ta os de darshan ta ho jande



    no mind aaaaaaaaaaaaaah
    22 Dhanvaad .... Ehi Tan Gal c Main Jyada Lambi soch gya
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    Quote Originally Posted by EKAMJEET DHIMAN View Post
    Thanku Mitra
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    Quote Originally Posted by LUCKY 'Ramgarhia Boy' View Post
    y ji raab bande ander wasda bhar kithe labda firda e

    but nice lines
    Sukriya 22 .. Sahi kiha tuc ,,, Meri Soch Glat c Veere
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