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» Kaur_Rules «
10th June 2009, 01:16 AM
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Sajan akha ch a wasda ae,


eh bol koi binmol nai .
dil vich payar ta poora hai ,
ki hoeya sajan j kol nai.
kasak yaar nu paun di,
kuj puchan di, kuj sunaon di,a
ik allak mere andar jagdi ae.
kinj dasa usnu k gal dila di,
bula te nai akhan vich wasdi ae.
maneya izhaar jaroori ae,
par ijhaar layi mahotaj akhra di,
menu na manzoori ae.
gal jehdi wandi di khushboo jaye,
gal jehdi dil nu choo jaye,
bina akhra to hi ho jaye.
lod hai akha nu samjan di,
ik dooje vich wasan layi,
ikatheya rovan hasan layi.
kuj tusi chalo kuj asi chalange,
nai lod zindgi piche nasan di.
ishareya ch sab kuj keh hunda,
nai lod muho kuj dasan di.
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bellicose parminder
10th June 2009, 01:18 AM
bahut sohna likhya hoya g....

GURI Ludhianvi
10th June 2009, 01:19 AM
bahut vadhiya e prabh ji...

» Kaur_Rules «
10th June 2009, 01:29 AM
dhanvad ji

kamaljit
10th June 2009, 05:29 AM
bahut sohna likhya prab ji....keep it up

gabhru punjabi
10th June 2009, 07:20 AM
Isharian ch sb kujh hunda e. . .Nai lod muho kujh dasan di.. . . . . .
Bht wadia g. . . .Gud a . . . Bht sohna likhea

cinderella
10th June 2009, 07:44 AM
gud..job..bhene

ਜੈਲਦਾਰ
11th June 2009, 09:42 PM
:goodone:

kamalthind
12th June 2009, 05:46 AM
really nice.......bahut vadia likyha

Jagjit9
12th June 2009, 05:57 AM
sachi ji tusi bahut badiya likhya

» Kaur_Rules «
13th June 2009, 11:39 AM
thanks sab nu bhut bhut

мαђαℓ sααß
13th June 2009, 01:12 PM
bahut vadiya jii

JatT saaB
13th June 2009, 01:54 PM
Bahut vadia ji...

» Kaur_Rules «
17th June 2009, 10:53 AM
thanks mahal , nd jatt saab ji

GILL SAAB™®
17th June 2009, 11:01 AM
thnx prabh ji

» Kaur_Rules «
17th June 2009, 11:13 AM
bhut bhut dhanvad sab da ji

jass_cancerian
17th June 2009, 11:53 AM
bohut vadhiya pesh_kash hai ji,

stylishheer
17th June 2009, 12:12 PM
really very nice prabh ji.............

» Kaur_Rules «
20th June 2009, 11:55 AM
:thankyou:

gαвняυ gυℓαв ωαяgα
20th June 2009, 01:07 PM
Jdo wakt ajeha aunda hai fer lor nai akhra piaryia di,
odo bolan da dil v karda nai bhasha aa jawe jdo ishareya di. .


Nahi reesa kuriye soch dia . . .

deep dhaliwal
20th June 2009, 09:38 PM
very well written .... keep it up///

ღMrs. G. Hayerღ
7th October 2009, 04:40 AM
very nice ji.....

» Kaur_Rules «
7th October 2009, 11:04 AM
thanks everyone..

Jatt!he3r
17th November 2009, 07:59 AM
bahut sohna likhya sista .....

Proud_desan
17th November 2009, 08:11 AM
hayo rabba...this is to good didiji...:)
LUB IT!!!!

» Kaur_Rules «
17th November 2009, 12:14 PM
thanks sis ji...