Kol uss de jaan nu dil na kare phir,

[jass_cancerian]

Kol uss de jaan nu dil na kare phir,


Har kushi har shauk hai qurbaan os layi,
Hai assin rakhi bachaa ke jaan os layi,
Kol uss de jaan nu dil na kare phir,
Bann gaye jad ton assin mehmaan os layi,
Haan dee laggi na jad os nu dharti eh,
Heithaan lain aaye assin aasmaan os layi,
Rishtiyaan de daayire ch jad oh ghiri,
Bhull gaye aapaan vee pehchaan os layi,
Raunkaan ton uss ne jo moohn churaaya,
Labh layi aappan ne vee sunsaan os layi,
Har khushi ton mod ke moohn apnaa hee,
Kar gaye jeena assin aasaan os layi,
Moh dee daulat par gareebee gam dee ditti,
Pher vee bullan tai hai muskaan os layi,

[GILL SAAB™®]

very nice veere

[jass_cancerian]

very nice veere


bohut bohut shukriya KEN,

[bellicose parminder]

vdia 22 g..........

[jass_cancerian]

vdia 22 g..........



thnx a lot ji,

[rickythakur]

bot vadiya 22 g

[jass_cancerian]

bot vadiya 22 g


rick thnx a lot,

[GURI Ludhianvi]

bahut vadhiya jass veer....

[jass_cancerian]

bahut vadhiya jass veer....


shukriya guri for the compliments,

[gary dhindsa]

bahut vadia aa ji nice a

[jass_cancerian]

bahut vadia aa ji nice a

thnx gary for the compliments,

[ਸਚਪ੍ਰੀਤ ਸਿੰਘ]

Bot vadia ji

[Aman Kharoud]

22 ji bohat hi acha likheya hai.very nice ji.......

[jass_cancerian]

Bot vadia ji

sachpreet bohut bohut shukriyaa,

[jass_cancerian]

22 ji bohat hi acha likheya hai.very nice ji.......


Amandeep bohut bohut meharbaani poem pasand karan layi,

[punjaban jatti]

boht vadiya likheya ji

[gary dhindsa]

bahut vadiya likhia a ji

[jass_cancerian]

boht vadiya likheya ji

thnx a lot,

[jass_cancerian]

bahut vadiya likhia a ji


bohut bohut shukriya,

[$imren]

nice,,

[jass_cancerian]

nice,,


shukriya ji bohut bohut,

[Jagjeet.]

nice...

[Desi Boy.]

bahut vadhiya..

[Desi Boy.]

bahut vadhiya..

[jass_cancerian]

nice,,


bohut bohut shukriya ji,

[jass_cancerian]

nice...



thnx a lot jagjeet,

[jass_cancerian]

bahut vadhiya..



bohut bohut shukriya ji,