Shiv Kumar Batalvi...

[GURI Ludhianvi]

Ki puCHdiyo ho haal fakeeraaN da
SaaDa nadiyoN viCHRe neeraaN da.
SaaDa haNjh di joone aaiyaaN da
SaaDa dil jaleyaaN dilgeeraaN da!

Eh jaandiyaaN kujh shokh jahe
RaNgaaN da hi naaN tasveeraaN hae
Jad haT gaye aseeN ishke di
Muhl kar baeTHe tasveeraaN da!

Sahnu lakhaaN da tan lahb gaya
Par ik da man vi na miliya.
Kiya likheya kise mukadar si
HathaaN diyaaN chaar lakeeraaN da!

Takdeer taaN apni sauNkan si
TadbeeraaN saathoN na hoeeyaaN.
Na jhaNg CHuTeya na kan paaTe
JhuND laNgh giya iNjh heeraaN da.

Mere geet vi lok suneeNde ne
Naale kaafir aakh sadeeNde ne,
MaeN darad nu kaaba keh baeTHa
Rab naaN rakh baeTHa peeRaaN da.

MaeN daanashvaraaN suneeNdiyaaN saNg
Kai vaari uchi bol piya,
Kujh maan si saahnu ishke da,
Kujh daava vi si peeRaaN da!

TooN khud nu aakal kehNda haeN
MaeN khud nu aashik dasda haaN
Ih lokaaN te CHaD daeeye
Kihnu maan ne daeNde peeraaN da!


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[мαђαℓ sααß]

22 bahut vadiya keep it up ........

[GILL SAAB™®]

vadiya ji..

[prince makkar]

shiv da koi mukabla nai bai

[brar malke]

bai g batalvi saab da taan koi mel hi nahi

[GURI Ludhianvi]

bai g batalvi saab da taan koi mel hi nahi


sahi keha veere Ustaad Batalvi saab koi vi saahni ni.....

[stylishheer]

very gud....guri ji.........keep it up.....

[GURI Ludhianvi]

thanks jassi ji...

[jeeti]

ਵਧੀਆ ਜੀ ,,,,ਲੂਣਾ ਸ਼ਿਵ ਕੁਮਾਰ ਦੀ ਸ਼ਾਹਕਾਰ ਰਚਨਾ ਹੈ, ਪੜ ਕੇ ਵੇਖੋ ਜੀ

[GURI Ludhianvi]

ਵਧੀਆ ਜੀ ,,,,ਲੂਣਾ ਸ਼ਿਵ ਕੁਮਾਰ ਦੀ ਸ਼ਾਹਕਾਰ ਰਚਨਾ ਹੈ, ਪੜ ਕੇ ਵੇਖੋ ਜੀ


jarur parange Jeeti ji.... :ya:

[Aman Kharoud]

Very nice ji.

[bangerraj]

jarur parange Jeeti ji.... :ya:

dil la k padan naal amj paindi hai
bohat dunjgi soch naal likhi gayi hai loona
and thxxx for share

[_ρυяє ρυηנαвαη_]

vadhiyaa a g . .

[charanpreet singh]

Shiv was Shiv ....no one can be Shiv......

[GURI Ludhianvi]

Shiv was Shiv ....no one can be Shiv......


sahi kiha veer...

[jass makkar]

batalvi sahib,bhut vdiaa g....

[Nadaan]

yaar ....Shiv......main us jiha hi ban'na chahunda c ..bachpan vich sab ton pehlan je kise shakhshiyat nu jania c ....tan oh shiv hi c............Meri chup sang 100 janman ton yaari hai, Main sapni di akh vich umar guzari hai,

[GURI Ludhianvi]

Thanks ji Shiv Kumar Batalvi Ji nu ehni ehmiyat den layi.. :)