badlaav.....

[brar malke]

Badalde waqat naal mai khud nu badal dita
Aapna shahir badal dita,apna desh badal liya

Khud nu badalan di mai na koi kasar chhadi
Aapne khayal badal dite,apna ves badal liya

Tamana badali, reejh badali, sapne badle
Sare raaste badal dite, mukam badal liya

Iss duniya vaag khud nu mai pathar kita
Mai vi loka vaag apna rang badal liya

Har mushkil nu khud mai ja ja ke miliya
Aapna sara roop mainu badlna piya

Phir vi Tainu paon di chahat na "brar" badal sakiya
Tere karke hi taa khud nu si badalna piya

[Desi Girl]

nice ji...

[GILL SAAB™®]

bahut vadiya ji

[brar malke]

thanx frds,..

[GURI Ludhianvi]

balle veer... :clap: bohat sohna veer... :clap2: I'm short of words...

kade kade mainu lagda.. DC forum awards ch Self written poetry KING da award tuhanu milna chahida si.....

asi taan aiven thakke naal jitge.... (shayad jahli vota da kamal e... ) :p :p :imconfused:

[brar malke]

thanx veer g,..n awards di koi confusion nahi tusi keh ditta sanu mil gaya,..lol

[_ρυяє ρυηנαвαη_]

vadhiyaaaa a g . . .

[gurpreet singh]

nce ver ji

[bangerraj]

very nice yaar

[Happyforever]

vry nice ji.....

[brar malke]

thanx happy g,..