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E Singh
12th January 2012, 10:54 AM
DOSTO IS PURI STORY WICH MEIN SIRF MAIN MAIN GALLAN LIKHEYA BAHUT REH VI GEYA TE AA VI GEYIA..
Hun din jad doja charh aaya suraj ajj vi purav vicho c aaya
Yaar sawere 7:00 waje hi uth ke vrande wal nu fera paya:yawn3:
Bapu mera vekh ke hairaan mainu kehnda ajj ehnu kihne jagaya
Ujhrhna hau kite nu,---- jaa khedan lejaan wale DA phone jroor hau aaya:callme:
Par usnu ki pta ki sari raat mere dil kamle nu chain na aaya:hug:
Ajj ta agge nalo vi 2 min. manjan jyada ghasa ke :toothbrush:
Nahoun wale paani wich detol vi si paya
Walah nu gel vi nayi kolo panjaha(50) rupeye vich c lagwaya:punk:
Thodi jehi hor tour layi rey ben di aaeink nu lagya:cooldude:
Ohi samhe te claas pahounch ke nigah nu darwaje te tikaya:jump:
Marjani de aaoun da intzaar sahayahttp://www.desismileys.com/smileys/desismileys_0179.gif (http://www.desismileys.com/)
Aake usne fir use jgah land kraya
Yar tuhade ne fir nigah nu used wal tikaya:bigeyes:
Ajj pehli war jado usne aapna mukh tirchi nazar nal mere wal ghumaya:eyelashes:
Ta sach janeyo kalje chek hoon nu aaya
Hun ta usne ne vi mere wal khoob vekhna chaya
Langde lagnoude main ik hafta langhaya


Hun dena jad daswan aaya suraj ajj vi purav vicho c aaya
Krke vadda jigra hun mein nal parhde banti nu
Haal sara sunaya:chat:
Kamla sun ke kehnda wah kaka party hogi
Tu mainu pehla kyun nahi bataya:partytime:
Kehnda jo marzi hoje aj ni puche bina jaan dena:shifty:
Ooh malang ta foki farh marda c par mere dil ghabraya:heartbeat:
Chalo chayae farh hi si par mera hounsla ta wadheya:muscle:
Ajj ta jiwen samah langhan nu hi na aaya
Wajje jado 2 ghari de sab to pehla assi bahar wal nu aapna gohra duraya:bolt:
Jis mod to langjna usne ose mod ten naka laya:dance:
Thanda bulah hawa da jado us nal kheh ke sade kol aaya
Garmi vich injh jape jeyo bhathi vicho gujaar ke aaya
Main keha usnu lai vi aa gayi bhabhi teri hun tan Na main chraha(ਛੜਾ) kahaya
Langhan laggi jad kol di main kar ke takda jera keh ke sat shri akal purpose
Usno laaya :love3:
ohh vichari ghabrah ke boli tu koun aa main tenu bulaya:o
Main boleya tu na si par mera ta dil kamlaya:heartflowers:
Vingha jeha mooh krke kehndi theek aa main daso soch ke
Farh ke naal di saheli da hath usne kadma nu wadhaya:bolt:

(-_-) ਏਕਮ ਦੇ ਪਾਪਾ ਜੀ (-_-)
12th January 2012, 10:59 AM
22 sachi gal dassa taan bhot sohni xpression krda bai words de raahi ikk ikk words u di story nu byaa karda

so m xicted 4 next part......k agge ki hunda hun :thinking:

nice wrtten......kp it up

E Singh
12th January 2012, 11:11 AM
bahut bahut dhanwad veere

℘υηנαßℐ ℳυη∂α
12th January 2012, 11:17 AM
wadho agge ki bnda

guest5645
12th January 2012, 11:18 AM
good one bro again
nice story

but i will suggest you somethin kudi da naam na paana :) ami kise nu badnaami kahnu deni apa hana

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keep doing.. i'll wait for next part bro

harpreet banger
12th January 2012, 11:20 AM
22 att hai yar bahut vadiya keep it up brot.
22 agge vi dasna ki gal bni ja nhi

Neeturockon
12th January 2012, 11:58 AM
Vire,jaldi next part le k aao,dc wale tang ho rahe ne,keep it up

cute jatti
12th January 2012, 12:07 PM
nyc aa............

Mr. Vip
12th January 2012, 12:34 PM
agge the end happy brother....eh ishqe kurian ghat he sambhlda

prince85
12th January 2012, 01:35 PM
bahut vadia veere.. ekam part1, ekam part2, te hun ekam part3 v aa jave jaldi... :clap:

RuleBreakeR BoY
12th January 2012, 02:30 PM
:goodone::cdf:

So far.. so gooD
12th January 2012, 03:03 PM
ik waar ch poori kar deni c.. Eve lagda jime burger khawaya begair tikki ton :bigcry:

N y c :)

Kaur Punjaban
12th January 2012, 03:07 PM
awesome i m so excited & continue

Honey Singh
12th January 2012, 04:33 PM
gaah aa hun film bna deni appan
keep it up :clap:

a white elephant rider
12th January 2012, 06:06 PM
:thumbsup3:

♥ Lυ¢kソ♥ 'AmBяα Dα Tαяα'
12th January 2012, 06:24 PM
nice a y keep it up

ਨੋਟੀ ਬੋਆਏ
12th January 2012, 06:59 PM
:kaim:

ROnnY SaNGha
12th January 2012, 09:32 PM
bht wadiya veer g carry on n on.........

saini att da shokeen
13th January 2012, 10:01 AM
:clap2::clap2:

яσσρ
13th January 2012, 08:16 PM
Hmmm very nyc next part vi likho

♥ Lυ¢kソ♥ 'AmBяα Dα Tαяα'
13th January 2012, 08:35 PM
agla part v likh veer hun keep it up

*-* PreeT SaMRi *-*
13th January 2012, 08:42 PM
y Cheti likh yaar Agla part

E Singh
13th January 2012, 08:43 PM
ki gal yr ehne kaahle kato aa aage jaa ke gaddi charna sabar rakho sabar da fal suneya mitha hunda ....................dhanwad u sabhi da

♥ Lυ¢kソ♥ 'AmBяα Dα Tαяα'
13th January 2012, 09:21 PM
ki gal yr ehne kaahle kato aa aage jaa ke gaddi charna sabar rakho sabar da fal suneya mitha hunda ....................dhanwad u sabhi da

meetha bas ina v meetha na kara de ki
sugar ho jave :lolz:
dont mind veer

E Singh
14th January 2012, 06:07 AM
veere hadd hogi tusi punjabi hoke sugar di gal kari jaane oo
punjabi ta man gur khaa ke dakaar ni marr de tusi chotte jehe fal de jayda mithe hoon to dari jande ho....................:)

Sandhu Saab
15th January 2012, 06:41 PM
Vdiyaaa

cute girl
17th January 2012, 08:43 AM
nycccccc

Korbysim
22nd February 2012, 12:14 AM
boht badya ekam phaji...........................

Aman Kharoud
6th April 2012, 01:08 AM
Bohat vadiya g.....