Sanu yakin ae rab utte ...

[мαђαℓ sααß]

Jadon svere uthea ta yaad teri ne cherreya,
Uth pair vaddean de farre,
Ohna sir te mere hath fereya,
Light gayi te pathe kutro aa bapu ne ghereya
KuJh Yaar te rishtedar mile,
Ohna future bare gall kiti,
Sanu yakin ae rab utte asin ungli ohde vall kiti,
Hun shaam da vela aa gya Jehra akhir auna c,
Hale edher Yaaran ne v nahauna c,
Thand laggi ta chah da ik garama garam cup pita,
Koi changa Jeha seyar Jehra v c,
Asi tuhade val dhakk dita,
Ik hor kamm
றǺђǺļ (http://www.desicomments.com/forum/member.php?u=2331)
ne ena kamma de naal kita,
Rooh di pyass buJavan lyi tera har sah de naal khyaal kita !

[Param Sandhu]

gud gud.........:clap2::clap2:

[Happyforever]

vadia ji........

[ginny]

appreacited work

bollan nu bahoot wadia milayeya mahal veer

[pam kaur]

gud gud ji

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thnx jiiiiiiiii

[» Kaur_Rules «]

mahal ji sari poetry imaging ........out standing............

Rooh di pyass buJavan lyi tera har sah de naal khyaal kita ! ta end ta saab toh jabardast hai ji..............

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thnxxx jii

[GURI Ludhianvi]

kaim e 22 g.... :clap2:

Par punjabi ch likh leya karo... Punjabi ch parhan da sawaad i kuch hor e...

[Mrs. றαђαℓ]

hayeo rbba aina vdia.................

[мαђαℓ sααß]

Thnxxx gursharan jii

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thnxxx jot jiii

[мαђαℓ sααß]

sab da bahut dhanwaad

[JatT saaB]

eh ta saadi gall krti tusi ji

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asi ta apni hadd biti dasi ae yaar

[ღMrs. G. Hayerღ]

bout wadia likheya ji

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thnksssssssssss

[Aman Kharoud]

Bohat vadiya veer..... :goodjob: