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Mrs. றαђαℓ
13th April 2009, 12:19 AM
aas hai tu kde ta aawega
aisa awega murh na jawega

saare raaha ch har tarf har tha
nere aape nu vichya paawega

shad k mehl tu sehnsaaha
meri kutia nu bhaag laawega

dil da kalar udikda tenu
rehmat e mih kad vrsaawega

lmha lmha hai mutanjir tera
ki pta kad gle lgaawega

dard dariaao shookda aunda
aan kad tu taaria laawega

jingdi sej bann gyi ae saari
aan k pair kad tikaawega

lovepreet4787
19th April 2009, 12:26 AM
very nice jot ji

Mrs. றαђαℓ
19th April 2009, 12:26 AM
ki gal ennu gazal ni kehnde views eenne te post ik v ni...
aagle di mehnat da koi ta mul paa dya kro...

Mrs. றαђαℓ
19th April 2009, 12:27 AM
lo ji aa ge tc aaj aa gyi yaadd

Mrs. றαђαℓ
19th April 2009, 12:27 AM
kidn di paayi aa mai

lovepreet4787
19th April 2009, 12:31 AM
bahut vadia ji par tusi badal gaye jot ji

Mrs. றαђαℓ
22nd April 2009, 01:54 AM
kyu ki ho gya ji

gagandeep bawa
22nd April 2009, 08:42 PM
aa lai jot mai ta aa gaya...tu maiu yaad kita te mai aa gaya....

GILL SAAB™®
22nd April 2009, 09:54 PM
ki gal ennu gazal ni kehnde views eenne te post ik v ni...
aagle di mehnat da koi ta mul paa dya kro...

shayed gazal nhi ji eh semi-gazal keh sakde aan
vaise jo vi aa bahut vadiya likhea aa
dhanwad ...changi poetry liaon lai

bellicose parminder
22nd April 2009, 10:21 PM
vry nic jot g.....

мαђαℓ sααß
22nd April 2009, 11:35 PM
bahut sohna jot .........

Mrs. றαђαℓ
23rd April 2009, 12:16 AM
temku ji

Mrs. றαђαℓ
26th April 2009, 02:36 AM
prh lo koi

bellicose_parminder
2nd May 2009, 06:30 PM
sohnaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Mrs. றαђαℓ
3rd May 2009, 12:58 AM
dhanwaadh

Aman Kharoud
17th May 2009, 02:08 PM
very good ji.....

Mrs. றαђαℓ
17th May 2009, 10:51 PM
thnx dear

bangerraj
18th May 2009, 06:11 PM
nice one

gabru
18th May 2009, 06:16 PM
nice g.....

Mrs. றαђαℓ
20th May 2009, 04:15 PM
thnx dear

GURI Ludhianvi
20th May 2009, 07:10 PM
vadhiya e jattiye.....

tension naa lai a jayega oh.... :d

Mrs. றαђαℓ
25th May 2009, 07:17 PM
ok ji tuc keh ta nhe lainde

GURI Ludhianvi
25th May 2009, 07:53 PM
ok ji tuc keh ta nhe lainde

ki kiha.....? mainu samajh ni aayi... :p

Mrs. றαђαℓ
26th May 2009, 07:33 AM
mai kea k nhe tension lainde

tania
26th May 2009, 11:17 AM
wa ji wa.
bohat vadiya

Mrs. றαђαℓ
26th May 2009, 01:43 PM
thnx ji

amansidhu
18th February 2013, 01:22 AM
very nice