kde ta aawega........

[Mrs. றαђαℓ]

aas hai tu kde ta aawega
aisa awega murh na jawega

saare raaha ch har tarf har tha
nere aape nu vichya paawega

shad k mehl tu sehnsaaha
meri kutia nu bhaag laawega

dil da kalar udikda tenu
rehmat e mih kad vrsaawega

lmha lmha hai mutanjir tera
ki pta kad gle lgaawega

dard dariaao shookda aunda
aan kad tu taaria laawega

jingdi sej bann gyi ae saari
aan k pair kad tikaawega

[lovepreet4787]

very nice jot ji

[Mrs. றαђαℓ]

ki gal ennu gazal ni kehnde views eenne te post ik v ni...
aagle di mehnat da koi ta mul paa dya kro...

[Mrs. றαђαℓ]

lo ji aa ge tc aaj aa gyi yaadd

[Mrs. றαђαℓ]

kidn di paayi aa mai

[lovepreet4787]

bahut vadia ji par tusi badal gaye jot ji

[Mrs. றαђαℓ]

kyu ki ho gya ji

[gagandeep bawa]

aa lai jot mai ta aa gaya...tu maiu yaad kita te mai aa gaya....

[GILL SAAB™®]

ki gal ennu gazal ni kehnde views eenne te post ik v ni...
aagle di mehnat da koi ta mul paa dya kro...

shayed gazal nhi ji eh semi-gazal keh sakde aan
vaise jo vi aa bahut vadiya likhea aa
dhanwad ...changi poetry liaon lai

[bellicose parminder]

vry nic jot g.....

[мαђαℓ sααß]

bahut sohna jot .........

[Mrs. றαђαℓ]

temku ji

[Mrs. றαђαℓ]

prh lo koi

[bellicose_parminder]

sohnaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

[Mrs. றαђαℓ]

dhanwaadh

[Aman Kharoud]

very good ji.....

[Mrs. றαђαℓ]

thnx dear

[bangerraj]

nice one

[gabru]

nice g.....

[Mrs. றαђαℓ]

thnx dear

[GURI Ludhianvi]

vadhiya e jattiye.....

tension naa lai a jayega oh.... :d

[Mrs. றαђαℓ]

ok ji tuc keh ta nhe lainde

[GURI Ludhianvi]

ok ji tuc keh ta nhe lainde

ki kiha.....? mainu samajh ni aayi... :p

[Mrs. றαђαℓ]

mai kea k nhe tension lainde

[tania]

wa ji wa.
bohat vadiya

[Mrs. றαђαℓ]

thnx ji

[amansidhu]

very nice