SURAJ (SAM)
2nd October 2010, 06:48 PM
Ek Choti jehi love story:
Ek var di gal hai ek pind vich ek sohna jeha munda rehnda si, us da nam “SURAJ” si. Pind to thodi jehi doori vich bahut pyare pahad, nazre, mandir, bagichhe ate nadiya sun, ate ek Ghana (Dense) Jangal si, jis vich bahut khatarnak jangli janwar rehnde sun, te pind de paltu janwara nu kha jande sun. Pind de lagge (near) hi ek choti jehi nadi hundi si, jithe suraj hamesha waqt guzarda si, kyoki us de ma-peo nahi sun te oh apne vadde bhra de nal rehnda si te, oh dil da saf te ek nek insan si, te kai var usne pind te chote bachhe te loka nu jangli janwara to bachaya si…., suraj is tarah ek swarg jehi jagah te reh reha si, magar usdia akha nu talash si apne sache pyar di……………!
Kuz dina bad us pind vich Shehar (Urban Area) to kuch lok pahuch gaye, jo ke picnic te aye sun te rasta bhul gaye sun. Una vich ek soni gehi ladki si, jis da nam “RUHANNA“ si, oh shehar di ek padi likhi (educated) ladki si, pind de loka ne una nu rehan di tha diti te puri tarah una di khatir-dari kiti. Una sarya ne kuz din pind vich rehan da fesla lia, suraj ne unha sarya nu pyare pahad, nazre, mandir, bagichhe ate nadiya vikhaun da vesla kita., suraj nu ruhanna wich oh ladki nazar ayi jisdi di usnu hamesha to talash si, te oh usda da diwana ho gaya.., ruhana vi us nu apna changa dost samzan lag pai te dova vich dosti ho gai, te nazara eh si ke suraj roz ruhana nu pind de sohnia-2 thava te leke janda, te us nu khush rakda…,
Ruhana ek amir ghar di ladki si magar padi likhi hon karke naye khayala di ladki si, Ruhana nal usda hi ek sathi pyar karda si magar ruhana ne halle usnu koi jawab nahi dita si, idhar suraj usnal pepanah pyar karan lagpaya, usda ruhana to bina jina namumkin si, ruhana vi shayad is gal nu samaz gai si suraj de vihar te usde pyar to.., Dusri taraf ruhana da sathi ne usnu kiha ki oh us de lia kuz vi kar sakda hai, moka aun te apni jan v de devega….
Ek din suraj ruhana te us de sathia nu leke ghanne jangal to guzar reha si, ruhana nu pyas lagi te suraj us lai pani len lai chala gaya, achanak ek adamkhor sher ne una te hamla kar dita, sare apni-2 jan bachan de lai idar-udhar look gaye, ruhana ekali rehgai, sher us nu dabochhan lia agge wadya, ruhana ne bahut zor-2 di chillana shuru kar dita, magar usde sathiya vicho koi usdi madad lai nahi aya, usde lai jan den vala vi khamosh reha.., inne nu suraj de kanna vich ruhana di awaz pai, oh sab kuz chad ke us di madad lai dorya, sher ruhana te hamla karda is to pehla hi suraj ne sher te hamla kar dita te apni jan di parwah na karde hoe, ruhana di jan bachai…, is doran suraj kafi jakhmi ho gaya…,
RUHANA NU SURAJ DE PAYAR DA EHASAS HOYA,
Magar dil vich eh vi khayal aya ki oh suraj nal apni zindi kis tarah gujjar sakdi hai kyoki uh ek pind vich rehan wala, unpar larka hai magar dil da nek te us nu apni jan to v vadh pyar karn vala hai,
Te duzi taraf usda sathi jo Ruhana di tarah amir te pdya likhya hai, magar dilo unsu pyar nahi karda…..,
Hun tusi menu daso ki “RUHANA nu “SURAJ te us de sathi vicho kisnu chunna chahida hai…..
Te apne according story da climax likho…….!
Ek var di gal hai ek pind vich ek sohna jeha munda rehnda si, us da nam “SURAJ” si. Pind to thodi jehi doori vich bahut pyare pahad, nazre, mandir, bagichhe ate nadiya sun, ate ek Ghana (Dense) Jangal si, jis vich bahut khatarnak jangli janwar rehnde sun, te pind de paltu janwara nu kha jande sun. Pind de lagge (near) hi ek choti jehi nadi hundi si, jithe suraj hamesha waqt guzarda si, kyoki us de ma-peo nahi sun te oh apne vadde bhra de nal rehnda si te, oh dil da saf te ek nek insan si, te kai var usne pind te chote bachhe te loka nu jangli janwara to bachaya si…., suraj is tarah ek swarg jehi jagah te reh reha si, magar usdia akha nu talash si apne sache pyar di……………!
Kuz dina bad us pind vich Shehar (Urban Area) to kuch lok pahuch gaye, jo ke picnic te aye sun te rasta bhul gaye sun. Una vich ek soni gehi ladki si, jis da nam “RUHANNA“ si, oh shehar di ek padi likhi (educated) ladki si, pind de loka ne una nu rehan di tha diti te puri tarah una di khatir-dari kiti. Una sarya ne kuz din pind vich rehan da fesla lia, suraj ne unha sarya nu pyare pahad, nazre, mandir, bagichhe ate nadiya vikhaun da vesla kita., suraj nu ruhanna wich oh ladki nazar ayi jisdi di usnu hamesha to talash si, te oh usda da diwana ho gaya.., ruhana vi us nu apna changa dost samzan lag pai te dova vich dosti ho gai, te nazara eh si ke suraj roz ruhana nu pind de sohnia-2 thava te leke janda, te us nu khush rakda…,
Ruhana ek amir ghar di ladki si magar padi likhi hon karke naye khayala di ladki si, Ruhana nal usda hi ek sathi pyar karda si magar ruhana ne halle usnu koi jawab nahi dita si, idhar suraj usnal pepanah pyar karan lagpaya, usda ruhana to bina jina namumkin si, ruhana vi shayad is gal nu samaz gai si suraj de vihar te usde pyar to.., Dusri taraf ruhana da sathi ne usnu kiha ki oh us de lia kuz vi kar sakda hai, moka aun te apni jan v de devega….
Ek din suraj ruhana te us de sathia nu leke ghanne jangal to guzar reha si, ruhana nu pyas lagi te suraj us lai pani len lai chala gaya, achanak ek adamkhor sher ne una te hamla kar dita, sare apni-2 jan bachan de lai idar-udhar look gaye, ruhana ekali rehgai, sher us nu dabochhan lia agge wadya, ruhana ne bahut zor-2 di chillana shuru kar dita, magar usde sathiya vicho koi usdi madad lai nahi aya, usde lai jan den vala vi khamosh reha.., inne nu suraj de kanna vich ruhana di awaz pai, oh sab kuz chad ke us di madad lai dorya, sher ruhana te hamla karda is to pehla hi suraj ne sher te hamla kar dita te apni jan di parwah na karde hoe, ruhana di jan bachai…, is doran suraj kafi jakhmi ho gaya…,
RUHANA NU SURAJ DE PAYAR DA EHASAS HOYA,
Magar dil vich eh vi khayal aya ki oh suraj nal apni zindi kis tarah gujjar sakdi hai kyoki uh ek pind vich rehan wala, unpar larka hai magar dil da nek te us nu apni jan to v vadh pyar karn vala hai,
Te duzi taraf usda sathi jo Ruhana di tarah amir te pdya likhya hai, magar dilo unsu pyar nahi karda…..,
Hun tusi menu daso ki “RUHANA nu “SURAJ te us de sathi vicho kisnu chunna chahida hai…..
Te apne according story da climax likho…….!