kasoor....

[rajan singh patialvi]

Ik war das de Sohniye nei, ki mere kolo kasoor hoya,
aj kyu sare jag ander mai ina jada majbur hoya,
Tu vichri satho, Inj lage Jive Sansar mere sara Door hoya,
tera kha dhokha sohniye Dil mere choor choor hoya,

Jra Dil apne to puch lyi, chad k mainu....
TU KI PAYA, TU KI KHOYA......


@ rajan singh patialvi

[pam kaur]

:clap2:

[er_sarmukh]

duniya de rang sajjna aaj hor te kal nu hor.....
bohut vadhiya likheya hai g

[rajan singh patialvi]

thanks pam ji & sarmukh ji

[GURI Ludhianvi]

good ji.. ture challo...

[rajan singh patialvi]

thanks guri

[ohi kudi]

gud hai

[ਇਕ ਰੱਬ ਤੋ ਡਰਦੇ ਆ]

:clap3:

[gurvinder patialvi]

Was Best time of my poerty hun time ni milda

[*-* PreeT SaMRi *-*]

Bhut khoob ji...

[pradeep_gupta]

sohna likheya hai rajan ji..

[gurvinder patialvi]

Thanks Gupta ji for like

[Korbysim]

Ik war das de Sohniye nei, ki mere kolo kasoor hoya,
aj kyu sare jag ander mai ina jada majbur hoya,
Tu vichri satho, Inj lage Jive Sansar mere sara Door hoya,
tera kha dhokha sohniye Dil mere choor choor hoya,

Jra Dil apne to puch lyi, chad k mainu....
TU KI PAYA, TU KI KHOYA......


@ rajan singh patialvi

boht badya veere............

[saini att da shokeen]

:clap2::clap2::clap2::clap2::clap2:

[Aman Kharoud]

Bohat vadiya g.....

[Decent Desi Munda]

Very well written BRO :p