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jass makkar
20th December 2009, 09:28 PM
Maine munh ko kafan me chupa jub liya

tub unhe mujhse milne ki fursat mili

haal dil pochne jub vo ghar se chale

raaste me unhe meri mayyat mili

vo jafa karke bhi qabil e qadar hai

mujh ko meri wafa ka ye sila mila

jeete je mai too ruswa raha umer bher

bad marne mujh ko bhi tohmat mili

meri mayyat ko deewan ki Laash hai

aisa kahker shaher mai ghumaya gaya

istarah unko shohrat khuda ki qasam

meri rusvayion ki badolat mili

ek hi shaaq per saaz do gul khile

chaal qismat ki laikin zara dekhiye

ek gul qabar per meri sharminda hai

ek vo unki zulfaoon me izat mili

So far.. so gooD
28th February 2010, 12:09 AM
ek gul qabar per meri sharminda hai

ek vo unki zulfaoon me izat mili


kah nahi sakde ji kujj....enna sohna thread hai...

jass makkar
28th February 2010, 12:10 AM
shukria ji kisi nu ta pasand aya....

So far.. so gooD
28th February 2010, 12:15 AM
PARHAN da tareeka hunda ji....shayad kise nu parhna hee na aaya hove..... ya oh UNPARH houga..mere warga...hehehe...:d te oh bina reply kite chala geya...

jass makkar
28th February 2010, 12:18 AM
actully me poetry lover ha te ik ik word da matlab samjhdi ha...
par kayi nhi eda hunde..
eh ta apni apni soch hai

So far.. so gooD
28th February 2010, 12:21 AM
actually madam ji...

je dilo te dhyaan laga ke parhange...taan har cheez sohni laggugi....te interest v banuga.....

mainu v change lagde ne..

par main likhda nahi...kionki...main kise di feelings nu nahi yaad kraona chaonda...

agge hee duniya..pahla hee bahut dukhi hai...es layi...main jyaadatarr... JOKES hee paonda haan.......taan ki thora time layi.....koi taan hass lauga...

Happyforever
28th February 2010, 12:23 AM
Vry nice:clap2:

jass makkar
28th February 2010, 12:32 AM
hanji sahi gal kahi tusi par apnia feelings nu v nhi chupaya ja sakda...
me bhut hi introward ha par fer v kuj time to me games ch ana shuru kita....
int hoea hai mera v hasan ch...
shayd kisi time ta me hasna hi bhul gayi c....

So far.. so gooD
28th February 2010, 12:35 AM
plzz.....tusi apne baare na likho ji...

loka nu majaak karan di aadat hundi hai...

dil diya dil ch rakho...

jass makkar
28th February 2010, 12:40 AM
sab nu pata k me eda di hi ha...time milea ta mere purane punjabi poetry de threads dekhna jo me share kita c Dc te...

So far.. so gooD
28th February 2010, 12:43 AM
madam ji...

plzz..... main loka nu hasaonda haan....ohna nu dukhi nahi karda... nahi ....taan mainu dukh lagda hai....

so plzz....

GILL SAAB™®
1st March 2010, 09:15 PM
bahut khoob ji

jass makkar
1st March 2010, 09:36 PM
shukria Gill ji...

Aman Kharoud
3rd March 2010, 04:06 PM
Bohat vadiya hai ji.........

sukhminder
15th March 2010, 01:37 PM
bahut hi vadiya g

dil_jeet
15th March 2010, 02:56 PM
bhut hi vadiya

jass makkar
7th October 2010, 05:28 PM
shukriaa ji

$imren
7th October 2010, 05:32 PM
nice one.

zahid123khan@hotmail.co.u
5th March 2011, 11:51 AM
Bahot accha likhaji..........

Er Ashwani Bhatia
25th April 2011, 10:49 PM
nyccccc

amansidhu
14th February 2013, 12:37 AM
nice aa ji