Shayri woh hai jo

[pam kaur]

Aise likhne ka bhi kya fayda jo jhuta lage,
Aise rang ka bhi kya fayda jo fika lage,
Shayri woh hai jo dil se nikle, aur jise sunke,
Her dil mein thoda se to jazbaat jage.

[sukhminder]

bahut hi vadiya w

[pam kaur]

thxx sukhminder ji

[Rajinder Kaur]

very nice

[pam kaur]

thxxxxx jiiiiiiii

[jgjassi]

sory ji main is gal naal sehmat nahi aan
shayeri sirf dard nahi jgaundi dil ch
shayeri sirf sad nahi hundi
i think dard di jagah te jazbaat likhde ta theek c

[Sandhu_jatti]

sory ji main is gal naal sehmat nahi aan
shayeri sirf dard nahi jgaundi dil ch
shayeri sirf sad nahi hundi
i think dard di jagah te jazbaat likhde ta theek c

Yupp...m agree vith him...

[pam kaur]

thxxxxxx ji
par hun te likh ta ji
hun mere nhi theek kar sakdi ji

[Happyforever]

thxxxxxx ji
par hun te likh ta ji
hun mere nhi theek kar sakdi ji

Nice ji:)

Sis mein eh edit krta ...:)

[pam kaur]

thxxxxx sis jiiiiiiiiiii

[kanwarjot]

bilkul sahi keha ji

[pam kaur]

thxxxx jiiiiiiiii

[мαиιи∂єя..]

nice aa..

['preet']

nyc...

[deepakkumar`]

awasome....:cdf:

[saini att da shokeen]

:clap2::clap2::clap2::clap2::clap2:

[pam kaur]

thx..

[Moderator]

niceee g...............:)

[sandhugurdaspuria]

balle o jaimal siyan nahi reesa teriaa teri poetry
teria feelings
siree la ti pam kaure dukh dain wali

4 u
agar tum kehte ho tou maan laita hoon k main bdwafa hoon

tum tou wafa wale ho tum hi nibhayi jataii

[amansidhu]

v nice ji

[RuleBreakeR BoY]

Bht kmaal a ji