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pam kaur
15th October 2009, 02:38 AM
Jado raat di tanhayi menu kosdi hoyi menu jagaundi hai,
tan me raat to kuj savaal puchda han,
ki
mera kasoor tan das,
kyon menu son nahi dindi ,
kyon har raat meri vilkdeyan di lngdi hai,
kyon eni der raat v ena shor sunaai dinda hai menu,
tan raat menu akhaan dikhaundi hoyi kehndi hai,

k oye
bekdra
kise di neend kho k mere ton neend mngda hai,
kise nu hanju de k mere ton hase mng reha hai,

Tan mein usnu yaad divaunda han,
ki mein kise nu hanju nahi dite
me tan apne pyar ton pkka vada liya c te usne v vada kabooldeyan kiha c ,
"ki Jaan.. na mein tenu yaad karangi te na hi kade rovangi tu jana hai tan chla ja"

TE ME V US NU DILO KEH K AYA C K "KHUSH RAHI"

Ena sunke raat jor jor naal hasdi hai mere te kehndi hai ki tu javaab chaunda hai na tan sun

Eh jo tenu ajeeb shor sunai dinda hai na...
eh ohna vadeyan de tuttan da shor hai jo vade le ke tu apne pyar nu chad aya hai,
jo vade oh pl -pl tod rahi hai,

eh jo hanju teriyan akhan ch ne eh tere nahi eh usde ne ,
kyon ki usdiyan akhan tan kado diyan suk gayian ne
,te teri tanhayi teri sja hai,
us nek rooh nu tadpaun di ,jo tenu rab smjhi bethi c,

ena keh k raat jaan lgdi hai tan mein rat nu rokan dikoshish krda han te kehnda han
ki
oh hi mere kol ruk jave
mere naal galan krlave
menu ikalla na chade,

tan raat kehndi hai"
"NA BHAI TERE NAAL PYAR NAHI PAUNA
TERA KI PTA KIS MOD TE MERE TON DO -CHAR VADE LE MENU V CHAD JAVE
te aakh jave
"KHUSH RAHI"

plz kade v kise nal ada na karo ki us da dukh tuhanu jeen na deve ,
asi ta sab jar lea sayad koi hor pam ada na jare plzzzzzzzzzz.
:(:(:(:(:(

puna
21st October 2009, 04:47 PM
plz kade v kise nal ada na karo ki us da dukh tuhanu jeen na deve ,
asi ta sab jar lea sayad koi hor pam ada na jare plzzzzzzzzzz.


Pam Didi........koi words nai...tuhadi is story lyi...
superb....relly nice...

GURJEET4EVRY1
21st October 2009, 06:42 PM
very heart touching............thanks

GaganPreet Sahota
21st October 2009, 09:52 PM
bahut ghat lok ena galan nu samjhde ne kise nu jina dil ch vasayie thodi der baad ohi banda jadan ch aari ferda hai .......................its true.................

pam kaur
22nd October 2009, 04:53 PM
thxxxxxxxxx jo sach c mai te ohe boleya hai te sach hamesa sab nu vadiya lagda hai ji thxxxxxxx to all jiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

bangerraj
5th November 2009, 09:58 PM
bohat hi jiyada very heart touching ........................kuj kehna chahva ga

Koi kisi ke dard me shaamil nahi hai
har ada husan ke kabil nahi hai
sab kuch luta kar samajh me aaya
A duniya pyar ke kaabil nahi hai.

cute jatti
6th November 2009, 08:59 AM
bahut sohna likhia g.................

pam kaur
6th November 2009, 03:20 PM
bohat hi jiyada very heart touching ........................kuj kehna chahva ga

Koi kisi ke dard me shaamil nahi hai
har ada husan ke kabil nahi hai
sab kuch luta kar samajh me aaya
A duniya pyar ke kaabil nahi hai.

thxxxxxx ji ad shi keha ji A duniya pyar ke kaabil nahi hai. :clap2:

pam kaur
6th November 2009, 03:21 PM
thxxxxxxxx jasdip ji

Rajinder Kaur
11th November 2009, 01:18 PM
bahut h khub

pam kaur
28th November 2009, 09:34 PM
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ravan
30th November 2009, 12:39 PM
good one :)

pam kaur
30th November 2009, 05:01 PM
:heartflowers: txxxxxxxx jiiiiiiiiiiiiiii :heartflowers:

TejpalSIngh
19th December 2009, 11:10 PM
well done well done well done well done.............
bahut e jada vadiya story likhi g tusi.., very god.
thanx 4 shring
mere kol tuhadi taruf krn de word nahi hege. yaar bahut vadiya story hai..

pam kaur
20th December 2009, 06:23 PM
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anuradha
25th December 2009, 03:50 PM
kisi nazar ko tera intezar aaj bhi hai.jiska tujh par udhar aaj bhi hai.

pam kaur
25th December 2009, 04:25 PM
wah ji wah kya baat hai ji

jolly arora
26th December 2009, 11:45 AM
bahut hi wadiya hai ji tuhadi eh posst.....
thanks for sharing.........

pam kaur
26th December 2009, 02:15 PM
thxxxxxxxx ji ad :welcome:

gurpreet_singh_nov81
29th December 2009, 04:37 PM
waheguru jiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii likheya te bada hi sona haiiiiiii bas oyee la ke te hor sona bana dita jiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

pam kaur
30th December 2009, 03:27 PM
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Goli_maar_daa_gi
30th December 2009, 09:00 PM
bahut hi sach te shona likhya ha kash ah dard den wale samjen jan ki kina dukh hunda....kise no ji rab tuhanu tarki bakhse ji

pam kaur
2nd January 2010, 02:32 PM
shi keha ji
thxxxxxxx sis ji

*-* PreeT SaMRi *-*
10th November 2011, 07:41 PM
Bhut Touching Aa G .....

saini att da shokeen
11th November 2011, 08:42 AM
nycccccc

confused.jatt
12th November 2011, 11:27 AM
no words pam ji

harpreet banger
17th November 2011, 11:38 PM
very very vvvvv good pam ji

♥ Lυ¢kソ♥ 'AmBяα Dα Tαяα'
19th November 2011, 07:49 PM
kade vi ajeha kam na karo ki os nal duje da dil tute ya os nu takleef puje
kyoki time da tan kuj ni pata kadon kidan da a jawe

bhut he true story hai g