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Desi Munda
28th June 2009, 03:02 PM
The chains of the past
Pull me down oh so fast
Thought I could fly
But I’m crawling till I die

See me on the ground
That faithless clown
That funny man
With the holes through his hands

Wake me up
I need to hear something
Like a painter and his brush

How did I loose focus
How did I loose touch
I clouded my mind with deceit
I fell to the earth in defeat

You may have taken my wings
But my soul belongs to me
You may have taken my wings
But I’ll numb your lies with the truth I sing

And the crooked scum of life
Shall walk with me side by side
And the sinners be my sheep
In this fiery place I sleep

You can call it hell
It’s my 5 star hotel
For the evil men
Intentions misspent

Now fuel for the fire
They call me sire
And my wrath shall find your cheek
With a thousand souls of the weak

You may have taken my wings
But my soul belongs to me
You may have taken my wings
For that I’ll show no mercy

cinderella
29th June 2009, 09:00 AM
very..nice..ji

Desi Munda
29th June 2009, 03:05 PM
thank u ji...:p

sharara
29th June 2009, 11:14 PM
awesome :dancingdude: hehe really nice =]

Desi Munda
1st July 2009, 06:30 PM
thanx jhalli...:rofl:

sharara
1st July 2009, 09:25 PM
grrr..main jhalli nai aa!! poem ta samaj aa gayi mainu :p

**SARAH**
2nd July 2009, 01:10 AM
nice one...
beautiful.
thanks

Desi Girl
2nd July 2009, 02:05 AM
nice poem bro:) em sticking it for a couple of days.

Desi Girl
2nd July 2009, 02:06 AM
And two of you..please talk in English in the English section:mad::p

sharara
2nd July 2009, 02:07 AM
sorry di :( ..but he started it by calling me jhalli :(

Desi Girl
2nd July 2009, 02:09 AM
Sharu tell him to go by the rules plz;)hehehe

sharara
2nd July 2009, 02:16 AM
hehe ok i will :)

Desi Munda
2nd July 2009, 07:17 PM
nice one...
beautiful.
thanks

:thankyou:

Desi Munda
2nd July 2009, 07:18 PM
ok thanx sharara the 'fat aunt'..:lol:

Jagpreet
2nd July 2009, 07:48 PM
vadiyaaa veeerrrrrrrrr

gαвняυ gυℓαв ωαяgα
2nd July 2009, 08:16 PM
Great imagination,
:goodjob:

sharara
3rd July 2009, 12:20 AM
ok thanx sharara the 'fat aunt'..:lol:

haye oyeee

hehe ur welcome chota bacha :p

Desi Munda
3rd July 2009, 04:35 PM
vadiyaaa veeerrrrrrrrr

thanx ji

Desi Munda
3rd July 2009, 04:35 PM
Great imagination,
:goodjob:

:thankyou:

Desi Munda
3rd July 2009, 04:36 PM
hmmm..

Decent Desi Munda
17th May 2012, 09:55 AM
:goodone: